Finish the Story Contest - Week #55!

in #finishthestory5 years ago (edited)

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Contest Info

Welcome, dear writers, to our 55th Edition through the playgrounds of the fantastic!

Courtesy of our terrific partners, @Crowdmind, we're now also giving away sweet golden SNAX tokens! Let us raise our frosty mugs of banana grog to them! Haven't heard of SNAX? Then I urge you to check out Crowdmind's Interview with the team from the SNAX blockchain as well as our previous post.

What treasures await within the @Crowdmind enhanced Bananafish chest?

  • 1st place: n. 5 STEEM + 500 SNAX

  • 2nd place: n. 3 STEEM + 300 SNAX

  • 3rd place: n. 2 STEEM + 200 SNAX

  • popular vote: n. 4 steembasicincome share

(Please note there is a minimum of three votes to active the popular vote reward so don't forget to vote for your favorite story!)

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  • Help our contest & workshop to grow by giving it some visibility and consider linking back to this post in your entry.

  • Contest Prompt introduced on June 21st. Posts must be submitted, linked in the comments, by June 26th. Posts submitted after deadline (noon on the 26th) will be disregarded. Sorry, but I've got a job.

  • Winners Announcement will be posted June 27th. New contest is posted June 28th.

This is @dirge, by the way. The prompt below is inspired by true events.

good luck, brave storytellers.

Foreigner

“You can’t to do that,” she said in her broken English.

Her face was contorted in a rage, highlighting the wrinkles that came with late age. Lee Minkyung slammed the door behind her as she entered. “Other students. Yes. Say this is not equal. You can’t do that.”

Lee Minkyung pointed her finger towards the student in question, Park Dasol. The child’s lips still quivered in fear and anxiety, after having flunked her summoning test with a total and complete bomb.

“She failed. Yes.” Minkyung said. “Why you give her…another chance?”

Sarah Lopez folded her arms. Her excitement after first having met Minkyung deteriorated five minutes after their first class together, half a year back. Where Sarah’s style was calm, orderly and authoritative, Minkyung’s was hectic, erratic and authoritarian. The perfunctory policy of the Korean Magical Education Bureau regarding Korean instructors always shadowing foreign instructors in the classroom weighed on Sarah. It was Minkyung, and Minkyung only, that she butted heads with. Every day since then had been like brushing teeth with a razor blade.

This conflict, Sarah knew, was inevitable.

All other classes were perfect. Latin Summons accompanied with Bek Jinsoo, went smooth and the children brought out a myriad of lesser demons without error. History of Incantations with Lee Jaeyun was exciting, with students ready to participate, eager to learn the variations on Germanic blood rites and how these symbols shifted over time.

Sarah didn’t want to hate Minkyung. But damn if that bitch didn’t make it hard as hell not to.

So when Minkyung taunted Dasol in front of the class for failing to summon a basic familiar, that was the last straw.

Minkyung paced up to her and pulled Dasol’s breathing mask down, asking her why she was afraid to speak in front of the class. Dasol, large for her age, and in fact the largest girl in the school, stared down at her feet. Minkyung pulled the mask and let it snap back on Dasol’s face and at that, Sarah intervened.

She’d never interevened before. A foreigner wasn’t supposed to intervene in a Korean’s affairs. Especially an older woman’s affairs.

But Sarah did. And when the class ended, she brought Dasol along for an opportunity to summon the familiar with just the two of them in a side room meant for student studying.

Minkyung rambled on about how unfair it was. And Sarah finally broke.

“Shut up,” she said. “Stop talking and leave. Let me talk to Dasol. Let me help her, and that will be that.”

“Excuse me?” Minkyung bawked. Her neck shrunk back like a turkey and her splotchy makeup grew disheveled as the woman’s taught skin stretched over her face.

“Leave!” Sarah demanded.

Minkyung protested. Then they heard it.

“Hajima!!!” Dasol shouted in Korean. Sarah knew enough by this point to understand.

The student was shouting ‘stop’.

But she wasn’t talking to her teachers.

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  • An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.

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  • WIN 10 STEEM & 1000 SNAX to the writers with the best endings.

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GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!




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So is it working like that? How much patience..
Sometimes you don't need summoning skills to encounter bizzarre imps.

dude don't get me started

Lol I remember one of your articles.. my wife, who's specialised in inclusive practice, would go mental.

Bit of a rush, but made it in with the second offering for this round, although sure we will get plenty more before the gates finally shut with such a wonderful opening ;)

#sbi-skip

Mmh, judging from the taste.. This is an authentic first blood

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Damn, no one can beat those eye brow skills, but I was beaten to it by someone who forgot to comment!

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@maparari/grandma-finish-the-story-contest-week-55

(although now you say that... really should have taken it given the ending I went for)

#sbi-skip

Thanks for this advert gem. I always felt a hole in my life.. Now I know that all I missed was the Jappo blood seasoning!

Vote here your favorite story!

Normally, can't beat a good bit of gore, and especially not Korean gore, but going for oivas

@calluna stole my heart and my attention with her very real, very poignant story.

I'm sure that the fun will be reciprocal ✌

I almost forgot to put my entrance...

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@jadams2k18/gore-finish-the-story-contest-week-55

I was a little tainted

This edition you would have been the third to forget.. Summer tiredness (its hot as hell here, cannot sleep man) 😅

No wonder! That deafening silence on your part seemed strange to me already. Well, welcome to my world. It's hot all year round!

I get this one! Looking forward to 'finishing'. Had to look up familiars. Some of the more esoteric fantastical concepts are out of my ken, but I can learn. So, I have an idea, unless I misunderstand the concept of familiar. But, so what. It'll still be fun. Certainly a break from the more serious research in which I find myself enmeshed :)

In italian we say "famiglio".. Would be nice to have a little helper around or on my shoulder. Especially now, in this torrid June, I would dump to my familiar some office workload 😛

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