TEN YEARS

in #fiftywords6 years ago (edited)

Submission into @jaynas-minime - 50-word story challenge

PROMT: ‘FENCE’

TEN YEARS

Mark stepped off the bus a mile away from his destination...

He hadn’t been home for nearly ten years. He walked down one of the side roads; straight to the fence.

He remembered the screeching of tyres and the crash as if it were yesterday. His eyes filled with tears...

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Simple and powerful!!! Loved the twist at the end.Left me heartbroken!!!

Thank-you my dear. I am trying to make the most of the fifty words.

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This is very sad and poignant, @whitelite! Well done!

Thank-you @jayna, it's a good thing if I'm able to draw a bit of emotion... right?!

Sad, and nicely done!

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Thank-you, for the comment. It's nice to do a piece with some emotion every now and then...

A sad tale that packs a punch. Well done @whitelite

Thank you, I'm pleased you've appreciated the read.

Well written. You had me hooked with all 50 words.

Thank you @pyemoney, for your kind words...

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