The mysterious car... [Part 8]
"NO! Answer us first!" Emily demanded.
"Emily, calm down. They saved us." reasoned Andrew.
"We should do as they say, they did beat that wolf after all..." said Mike.
Andrew and Emily agreed.
"Finally, let's go. We would use the car but it has ran out of power..." Mark sighed.
Very good
Thank you.
Imagine if you were to complete a novel from this to publish. Might take a few years but worth it eventually.
It really does flow quiet well considering you are getting a chapter in per 50 words. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the story in the end.
Thank you for taking your time to read my story.
I couldn't even imagine myself writing a novel but now, perhaps in the far away future I will...
(As long as I continue writing...)
And actually at first, I thought it would be easier to make parts consisting of only 50 words each time, but now it kinda gets harder to write a meaningful part :D
I try to read and vote for as many as the fiftywords as i can if the content is good obviously.
I really like the direction you took though. I can only assume that it is going to get tougher as you go along to keep the story moving and still give enough info to each part.
Adding dialogue is the hardest.
It takes up a lot of words...
Dear sir,
Last night you gave me down vote but what was the reason for down votes ? I Want to know about that, actually i'm new here in steemit, you all uplliner shoud help the new user for more improveing and teach lesson that how to use.
But you showed your bad kindness to me. I dont hope like this job from a upliner.
Hope you will solve it soon to make me happy again,please be kind to me.@vaitelavicious
I guess I should've given a warning first, my bad.
And for that I am sorry.
But your comment (that I downvoted) was quite irrelevant to my post.
You said nice photography and that you love the photo, but the photo had little to do with my actual photo(it wasn't even mine). I am guessing you just clicked on the post, saw the photo and posted about it without actually reading my post.
I suggest you to first read the post and then post a comment about it.
Thank you very much.
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