[Violett's magical girl project] - A short story by a beginner [That's me : )]

in #fiction6 years ago

Clackety-clack Clackety-clack

The rumbling of the train could be heard from inside.
The train was not packed but all the seat had been taken. They stand in front of the left door in the second couch from the back of the train.

“You sure it’s ok for you to be here?” Ruby asked for confirmation.
“Yeah, pretty sure. It’s day off, I don’t have school today.” Amber replied.
“Alright, cool.”

Amber raised an eyebrow and crossed her hand.

“Why? You think I skipped school or something? Amber asked with a smile on her face.
“No, just … you know, you’re a student of a … what do you call it? A prestigious school or something like” Ruby said.
“So you know, I just thought that you might need a permission slip or fill in some form in order to go out” Ruby continued explaining her question earlier.

Amber started giggling.

“Okay, first of all, it’s school holiday. So no school for two weeks, no need to fill up a form or anything like that. Secondly, my parents are aware of today’s plan. So stop being such a worrywart.” Amber said.

Her right hand grabbed Ruby left hand. “Nothing going to stop me from hanging out with my bestie.” she said with a little smile on her face.

Trees, buildings, cars, bridge. The view flashes by. The sun shines on their face through the window, only blocked by the buildings and trees. Creating an illusion as if the sun is blinking.

Roseraie Station, Roseraie Station

The announcements signal the train arriving at the station. After the door open, both of them get off the train along with the other passengers. Holding hand they followed the crowd toward the exit. They scanned their card on the reader and went through the exit gate. At the front of the station, they were blown by a breeze and the ever so bright sun that was shining on them was interrupt by a passing by cloud. They continue their walk under the clear sky, holding hands and swinging back and forth. Catching up with each other and talking about frivolous things. After about 10 minutes of walking, they arrived at their destination, Paulownia Mall.

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My first post. Forgot to put part 1 in the title.
Took longer than I expected since I'm not use to this site posting system.
I use only 1 image because I don't want the image to prevent people from imaging the story through their own ...well imagination.
Sort of like if people watch a Harry Potter movie before reading the books. They will have a hard time rendering the image of the main trio without thinking about Daniel, Emma and Rupert.

As for the magic part of the story, it will be in the latter part of the story.
I hope you enjoy it. I will try to post frequently.

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