The PROTON who fell in love with an ELECTRON | PART 4

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So the Hydrogens set out to find electron but their journey was not an easy one. Every time they had pass through s-orbital to p-orbital or to d-orbital, they had to cross a very powerful quantum field which would take them a few days to pass through.
Moreover, the quantum field was rumored to be inhabited by the "Anti-particles", a very dangerous and savage group which would destroy any inhabitant of the orbit. These are 'kamikaze' type meaning they would kill and die themselves in the process.

Thankfully the hydrogens had not encountered any of them till now, and they were about to cross Pz-orbital and enter the quantum field once again to get to d-orbital.

Luck was not in their favour this time.

They were about to reach to the end of the quantum field when an Anti-matter, the deadliest of the Anti-particles, appeared out of nowhere.

The Hydrogens tried to make a run for the field and one unfortunate guy got left behind.

The Anti-matter showed no mercy on him and both of them exploded as the two of them collided.

The remaining Hydrogens got thrown away by the powerful explosion and most of them were injured.

They decided to take a break before any further investigation.



Back at the nucleus

Proton was slowly getting better at keeping his emotions at bay. Yet the image of Electron would flash in front of his eyes whenever he closed them.

Neutron made plans for him and Proton to go to H2O amusement park to cheer up his friend which he agreed to.

It had been three months since she left so it was time for him to move on although he still loved her the same.

They went to the amusement park and had a good time. Proton was slowly getting out of his isolation and things were getting back to normal.



The question still remains, will the Hydrogens find Electron?

Find out in the upcoming parts.



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Sorry for the huge delay. My phone was stolen and all my previous drafts were lost.

To read the previous parts go to my profile here .

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I like the way you didn't go all out with the hydrogen's quest. I think it's a good approach to give readers some taste regarding hydrogen's and proton's point of view at the same time. I would like to keep reading the next parts with this dynamic. Besides, maybe you could introduce some impactful event during the H2O amusement park, who knows?

Keep up the great work; I'm looking forward to read the next parts!

Shaden

Thanks. I was thinking of adding stuff that happened at H2O but then thought against it.
I'll keep your suggestion in mind. :)

I'm sorry to hear about your phone. That really sucks. But I'm glad you're okay and continuing this story. I've been waiting for this chapter and I thought that perhaps you decided to give it a break. I'm glad that's not the case. Waiting for the next one!

Always loved your science and love facts :D

Thanks. I appreciate that :)

And the plot thickens... lol... too bad about the hydrogen :(

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