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RE: [Bilingual Esp/Eng] Las Lágrimas de Dios / God's Tears
In some ways your writing reminds me of Robert E. Howard, because something very extraordinary happens whenever you deal with gods and dreams and the extremes of reality and consciousness. I loved this piece.
OMG I had erased the 2nd paragraph and substituted it for the penultimate one! The story was all mixed up and barely readable (I don't know when I did this, it was ok yesterday). Sorry to have you read the wrong version hahsdsahd whyyyy, so sad!
And thank you for your comment. :) I've never heard of Robert E. Howard. I'll look him up.
Instead of "who would cry the death" you might want "mourn the death."
Oh, yes, what an oversight. That's a hispanism right there. We say "llorar la muerte de alguien", but it's clearly a term without a direct etymological equivalent in English.
Thank you for the suggestion. :)