I'm become pretty good at not using adverbs :D (uh.. after a lottttttttt of yelling at myself to stop. STOP.) They still pop out on occasion, but I've been led to believe that one or two is fine. My main thing is verbosity. Sigh. And grammar. I'm grateful that you say it has correct grammar because I struggle a lot with commas. I know the basic rules, but sometimes I put a comma where there is a natural pause and thus has no need to be there and next thing I know I'm writing that sentence over and over fifty times trying to work out the dang comma.
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