Tweet - Constrained Writing Contest #13

in #fiction7 years ago

The ache in her knuckles, a bone-deep pain when she bent her fingers or grasped or gripped, reminded her of all those days in the field: pulling, picking, planting. It seemed cliché to bother telling her grandkids—their fingers flapping wildly over screens so bright the whites of their eyes glistened—about what it was like in her day. She felt her own eyes roll when she tried to form the words: when I was young, or before the Internet. And that’s where they lived now. Online. In spaces she knew existed, but didn’t fully understand… at least not understand in the way she knew those rows and rows of beet greens that would flop under the heat, or those lines of dirt worked so far under her nails that not even toothpicks could carve it all out. Tangible things—a red, round beet with a hairy rat tail, a chewed-off, ragged fingernail.    

She reached for the last of jar of her famous canned peaches from the storage room shelf and wrapped her hands around it. Her cursive stretched across the sticker on the glass: “Summer 2017.”  She remembered the exact day she made them because it was also the day that her pet bird, Brinkley, had died. She found him lying on his side on the newspaper that lined the bottom of his cage. When she was staring into the cage, she was sure dead Brinkley said “tweet” – not as a sound, but as a matter-of-fact word. When her grandson called later that night, she told him about the bird speaking because it had left her so bewildered.   

Her grandson said, “You’re serious?”

She said, “He spoke, but he was dead.” 

He said, “Tell me this again so I can tweet it.”  

And, she did. She told the story again, but slowly. She added in more details about the day. And then she said,“okay, let me hear your bird noises, let me hear you tweet,” but he just laughed before saying goodbye.    

And today, as she thought of Brinkley speaking again, she stared at the word ‘summer’ written in her familiar, bubbly cursive. The shape of the words, her letters, was as much a part of her as the sunspots on her hands or the roundness of her shoulders. But now, well, now she couldn’t even press down a pencil hard enough to form letters on a page. And that was another kind of ache. She wondered about all those digital words in typefaces that looked like everyone else’s—she thought of the Times New Roman letters that arrived from her grandson on her birthday to the email she rarely checked. And she wondered, what would happen to her if she pressed her spindly fingers down on the keyboard and plucked out words, line by line.   


This original fiction is my entry for the Constrained Writing Contest #13

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I enjoyed and appreciated this. My husband and I have started homesteading and a lot of times, if I have a gardening question, I call my grandmother and ask her what to do. She has the biggest green thumb of anyone I know! I know she appreciates having a grandkid that is interested in putting in hard labor and enjoying the fruits of that labor. Thank you for your entry!

Thank you! I think a lot about the disconnect between generations (especially because of technology) and how we are losing some of the important hard skills — awesome that it sounds like those skills are beumg inherited in your family.

I think gardening was becoming a lost art, but there is a large uprising of people who are going back to the simple life without fully abandoning technology. Instead they are switching to an earth friendly alternative like solar energy. I want solar so bad! Anyways, very good! Very relatable for me!

Absolutely—there are a lot of technologies that make a return to ‘simplicity’ (a loaded term, I realize) possible.

Our absolute dream is a net zero home and the lifestyle that goes with it.

Net zero homes are awesome! You would think something like that would be a standard, but sadly it isn't. If I was to build a home, it would be something worth doing. We didn't build, but we bought a foreclosure several years ago. We are trying to get debt free, but eventually I want to add on and do some energy saving updates.

That's a great option, too--the add ons. We are considering something like that if we can't find a lot to build from scratch on.

I hope one day it is standard, but you know... I think just making those choices has an impact because you are able to lead by example and other people see what's possible. Glad to have connected with you -- it's nice to meet like-minded people!

There is a huge crowd of homesteaders on here and it's always fun to check out their energy saving, back to basics projects they are doing.

Wow! Great writing. I really liked your line,

or those lines of dirt worked so far under her nails that not even toothpicks could carve it all out.

Glad to have been able to read it! Thanks for sharing.

Thank you—I tried to repeat “lines” and “rows” to connect the ideas.

Very well written! And it raises some solid points.

And that’s where they lived now. Online.

I'm 21 myself, and even I remember how the world was different when I was around 10, compared to how it is for 10 year olds today.
What I loved most about it, was the simplicity of it.
If we had agreed to meet on a thursday at the park, we met that thursday in the park. No further questions asked or confirmations needed.
Now, however, you need to confirm that you're coming 50 times before the actual event. -.-"

Thank you very much for your entry :D

Ha, and drop a pin to send someone a live map of your route to the meeting point.

It's interesting -- I wasn't trying to be polarizing or reductive -- certainly people of any age can be engaged online or not: it's not just a young/old thing.

Of course, I wasn't trying to speak about a certain age group... Just how much has changed in such short time.. Scary to think how much more will change in the next ~10 years...

It's hard to even imagine! I have a baby, too...

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