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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 11) - The Hours Between 1500 and 1600

in #fiction7 years ago

Haha! Definitely one of my favorite chapters to write. I'm glad you enjoyed the shampoo attack. I really wanted to portray the struggle parents feel when they're trying to give their young kid a bath.. but from the child's perspective. I tried to find a reason why he can't use his powers all that much, or else I would've written a fight scene in every chapter of the book. Then I thought, "Oh bubbles!"

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