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RE: The Laughter of a God - Finish the Story Contest, WEEK 30
A really great ending, I like the 'sword in stone' style finish, speaks of a promise of there being a tomorrow for those that got away.
A really great ending, I like the 'sword in stone' style finish, speaks of a promise of there being a tomorrow for those that got away.
Thanks Gaby. That is exactly what I wanted for the ending... the feel of optimism for the rest of the tribe. I kind of wanted it to be 'a double edged sword'... Excuse the pun 😉, in that the two main characters bite the dust, but the tribe live to fight another day.
I'm really happy that came across strongly.
P.s. sry for the late response. I'm away from home with no access to steemit other than my phone and rubbish WiFi.