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RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty Five "Beckoning to Madness"
I understand, it is sometimes really difficult to make the chapters right, as they are not as I have them written in my actual novel, since for the most part it wouldn't work for steemit. And actually when you read the next part you'll see why it had to be done that way, the timeline would not add up otherwise.
I'm glad you enjoyed the second part :)
Oh, I know what you mean about the difficulties of retooling it for Steemit. I have such a tough time breaking A Day in the Clouds up into parts as well. There wasn't really anything wrong with the first part, I just meant that it may have been better served as an implied event interwoven in Anna's narrative.