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RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty Five "Beckoning to Madness"
Oh, I know what you mean about the difficulties of retooling it for Steemit. I have such a tough time breaking A Day in the Clouds up into parts as well. There wasn't really anything wrong with the first part, I just meant that it may have been better served as an implied event interwoven in Anna's narrative.