RE: Reborn: Chapter Fifty One "Vows and New Beginnings"
You have mentioned you're not a binge reader. And I have mentioned that splitting it for steemit has been a pain in my booty, can't always catch it right. I felt like if I ended it at the ** it would have been super short. And it definitely would have in comparison to my other chapters with only Jared's chapters as exceptions. They have to stand alone But you're probably right. Also, I think I felt like the chapter of Anna getting information would have been too dull on its own? But maybe it wouldn't have dragged as much if I kept it shorter. I'm not sure I'll ever quite get splitting this book up right for this platform. Writing Today Again intentionally for steemit was a whole different thing.
Also, I think that's probably the only chapter for the rest of the book that was a little dull (and I maybe wanted to get it out of the way, LOL). Necessary because of the info however.
Oh, hey, don't take my word for it. I'm the last person who should be giving advice about posts here haha! Your stories are doing exponentially better, my friend :D
I found the first part very intriguing, and wouldn't have felt shortchanged if it was a standalone chapter. The second part, to me, felt it dragged a bit because of the montage sequence. But, overall, this chapter felt very smooth to read compared to the previous ones that introduced the new characters. The information was easily digestible, as I mentioned previously. Perhaps I'm just being acclimated to the newer setting now.