It is nice to see the story still progressing, Life may have been hard, but sleepy is sleepy. The filling out of the characters, it is always nice to see them being rounded out.

On a side note: https://steemit.com/contest/@croupierbot/minnow-fiction-author-support-lottery-round-two
You can enter three post, your or others, this provides a little bit more exposure to your post, and provides a chance at winning the lottery. Right now not real big, but it is growing.
Of course I can edit that out if you like.