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RE: Announcing The First Fiction-Trail Writing Competition
Hi,
The quality of the picture is not super duper. I just like to make sure I understand what's on it. First of it's a table with a mug, a book, and a pen on it. The book is fairly old. The book content is apparently implying a little girl walking on the path made by a vehicle, cart or a carriage in red shoes. On the left side of the lawn is a dog that stands in front of a puddle. Seven seagulls fly toward setting or rising sun while one seagull sits on a street lantern. Oh and we see an airbaloon on the right pane. Correct?
Pretty much... it's not so much what you see as where the picture takes your imagination.
I couldn't have put it better, @shadowspub :) Thank you
Hi Michelle,
Thank you! I figured this out and I think I hit all the requirements.
Here is my entry .... https://steemit.com/fiction-trail/@mgaft1/a-drone-operator-an-original-short-story
Thank you. Imagination has to be supported by proper details. If instead of seagulls I see dragons, then imagination will take me the wrong direction.
how can it be wrong?... whose to say they are not dragons off in the distance?
Reminds me of an exchange between my then young niece and my mother one day. My niece was drawing a tree using a blue crayon and my mother was chiding her because the colours were wrong.
My niece quietly looked at her grandmother and responded, "Nana, in my world, trees are blue today". My sister and I cracked up laughing at the simple honesty. It was her imagination and her choice how she used it.
It could be wrong very easily. If instead of one picture you see a different one, for example, this one
then your story is not going to correspond to the assignment.
It isn’t hard to come up with something. The hard part to make sure that your created reality accommodates all the details and it totally makes sense – has no internal contradictions. I see so many stories that are falling apart because authors don’t follow through with their imagination, the design of their story lacks continuity and a reader falls out of the “suspension of disbelief” state.
In other words, the starting leap of imagination has to be equal to all participants. Every story should operate within the same boundary conditions. That is the part of the assignment.
Personally, I also don’t like what’s called “portable stories,” where the author will take something previously written and hangs the assignment picture on the wall.
you really try to think this to death don't you? You start with the picture provided and see it as you want. If you don't want to do it or don't like the approach, then move on.
Not sure @shadowspub why are you getting emotional? I didn't say I didn't like the picture. I only wanted to clarify its content and then explained my point of view, why the content of the picture is important. 😉
why are you being so obtuse? .... oh right .. i should not feed the troll... bye bye
@shadowspub
We'll see who's obtuse when the stories are going to come up. Until then, Good Bye little girl.
Hi, @mgaft1,
If you "right-click" and "open in new window" you may be able to get a slightly larger rendering of the image...
Thank you!
You're very welcome.
Even better, try this high-resolution version of the image! ;)
If I ever find its original source, I'll let you know.
Hi @creatr,
I am finalizing a story now. Here it is, I placed it on a different site for now just to explain you my difficulty.
http://zapme2it.com/trader/a_drone_operator.html
As you can see, the story is structured in such a way that the contest picture is presented at the end of it. Thus, I'd like to ask you how I should I let the contest jury know that this story is sent as a contest entry?
Thank you for your help!
I'm really sorry I didn't get back online to sort out the questions arising from this competition.
With this, and future competitions, the picture is there to inspire your imagination to take a journey.
There are no right or wrong ways to go about this piece, it's not an exam or test, it is purely a way of getting people to write and receive rewards for their writing.
If you saw dragons rather than seagulls, then that's amazing! Write about that! If the picture reminded you of an adventure you went on once, as a child, write about that. If the picture took you somewhere beyond the path, streetlamp and seagulls and didn't mention them, write about it.
The only criteria was to use the picture as the FIRST one so all entries were tied together for ease of judging, and that the tags #fiction-trail and #fiction were used.
The rest was down to your imagination.
Hi, friend,
I'm sorry, but I don't know how to help you with this; you should contact @michelle.gent because (as I understand matters) I believe the picture needs to show up as the thumbnail for the post. The only way I know of (on Steemit) to do that is to have it be the first photo in the piece.
Perhaps @michelle.gent can advise if there is a way? Good luck!
Thanks to your enlarged picture I was able to see exactly what's on it. I am working on a story right now and will consult with you once it's written.
Thank you for your concern!
Glad I was able to help. ;)
Perfect! Thank you.
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Hi @mgaft1, I left another main-line "Reply" with full details of the artist and etc...