THE UNKNOWN STORY OF EVERY WOMAN (An original POETIC article)

in #feminism7 years ago (edited)

The lady loved him, more then her life. His smile was the only thing which she totally desired. The bond of marriage was not just a knot, for her it was their souls which were now tied.

He loved her too. But he was unaware, whatever he was doing was leaving her in despair. He protected her from all the evils of the world, everyone adored, for how beautiful was their love. But he didn't realize what he was doing, he was keeping her bird in a cage and refused her from flying.

She said she wanted to fly, she was made for it, he said whatever he is doing, its for HER benefit. She shouted, she fought, with the one she loved the most. He did the same and issues arose, such a beautiful couple, now behaved like foes.

She was in deep pain, she cried. It was tough for him to see her tears, so he also tried. But he believed that he was totally right, he wanted her to obey and not to deny. She sealed her lips and didn't show her desire, she didn't want to hurt him so she kept a fake smile. While she was alone she still didn't weep, because its not easy to control emotions, when they break out from somewhere deep.

She stored it all, inside her core. She faked smiles because his man was close. Many years passed by, she forgot she had desires, all she knew was that dreaming was not her right.

All those years, she was unaware, that her pains were turning into a dark black flare. She got sick, she got so ill, all she was left with were tears in her family's eyes. It was then, when she realized..... She was soon going to be the reason of his lover's cry, for whose happiness she sacrificed her life.

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impressive work @himshweta, beautiful portrayal of emotions.

Thank you for understanding it @jznsamuel. My overall purpose is to make people see the hidden things of the world. Feels good to see that, even if the traffic is really minimal, the people reading it are taking it seriously. Thanks a lot for taking the time to reply.

It's a nice sketch of a seemingly common story of a present day household. But I didn't get the relevance of your first tag. When both were in love with each other and she decided on her own to sacrifice her desires in favour of her love, how come the issue of feminism came into play? It was her own choice to let go her wish to "fly out of the cage". The door of the cage was always open!

I find your following lines more befitting to this situation:

ये कैदखाने जो कुछ दुनिआ ने बना रखे हैं,
और कुछ इनमे से, हमने खुद रचा रखे हैं |
गलती तो उनकी भी थी, गलती थी कुछ समाज की,
कुछ गलती थी मेरे अपनों की,
गलती सबसे बड़ी थी जिसकी, वो मेरी थी |

The feminism tag is used here because it is a story of almost every woman and it goes unnoticed. Yes it was her choice because that was the only choice she had. The other choice was to leave her husband, the person she loved, the person who she knows won't be able to live without her. The person she wants to take care of. Even if the door of the cage was open, she would loose her love if she flew.

We are what we are, and not what we could have been, only because we choose to become prisoners to our own choices. And this is applicable to all, irrespective of the gender. This is what I feel.

Of course it is applicable to all genders, but this article is about what almost every lady chooses, her love, over her freedom. This might be called a strength by some, a sacrifice by some, a big heart by some, but I believe she needs to wake up and stop sacrificing, and think about herself, if no one else is thinking about her.

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