Lesbian Zombies from Outer Space - Horror Comedy Graphic Novel - Pages 21-22

in #comics7 years ago (edited)

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Sometimes when Hot Girls make out: IT'S EVIL! What happens when a flawed male sexual fantasy becomes a nightmare? The funniest zombie apocalypse you've ever seen!

Lesbian Zombies from Outer Space

Previously: The bro dream has finally happened! Ellis talked his girlfriend into a threesome with some random girl from craigslist, and Ace is perched and ready to videotape the orgy from the closet. The girls have stripped and made out while emitting an odd humming sound. They were strangely quiet until they turned to Ellis and seemingly asked for his dick to join the party...

(Oh yeah, and another character found a naked space alien in the woods who made out with her bi-curious date...)


And if you've just stumbled on these pages and want to get caught up on the story, you can start at PAGE 1.


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Yikes - talk about anti-climactic!

Well, for all you readers out there who didn't see this coming, now you know the lesbian zombies' dirty secret: they literally eat cock. Who thinks of this shit?! (Oh, right. It's me.) Horror is often built on fear and anxiety regarding sex and sexuality, so I figured I'd be really unsubtle about it and see what happens.

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Looks like Ellis is a goner, and the lesbian zombies have sensed the presence of more man-flesh. Tune in next time to see if Ace can escape with video evidence of the impending apocalypse!


I thought it would be interesting to compare an early draft of the script to the final version. This was the first comic script I had ever written/adapted, so it took a little while to get the feel for how panels and action could work best in a static format like comics. The early version tries to get too much done on a single page. I think the immediate transition to Ellis being woman-handled on the bed was the more effective way to go. (You'll also notice that the length of the script grew in the later drafts.) Take a look:

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Thanks for reading, and if you like what I'm doing, your upvotes are appreciated!


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It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light

lol this is incredible man you deserve big payouts for these, keep em comin(in more ways than one)

Heh - thanks for reading! More are definitely on the way.

Reminded me of "The Lair of the White Worm" for that one scene... :)
Good art, good pacing! Now I want to look up the rest

At least one other person has mentioned that to me in the past. I know I saw that movie year ago, and I remember it was pretty trippy. I'll have to go back and watch it one of these days.

I read the rest now, really cool! lol he's a real porn connoisseur, working his dream job. Would totally make a good horror movie or series in the style of Slither or Ash vs the Evil Dead

Yes - I love Slither. Ash too. Ace's porn expertise may or may​ not come into play later in the story...

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