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RE: ColorChallenge: SaturdayIndigo - "Sympiosis" [7MinuteFreeWrite]

in #colorchallenge7 years ago

Absolutely incredible stuff, @jedau! You are seeing things through the eyes of different characters and giving each one their own personal reasons for their actions. Multiple-layered writing skills or what!!?? I even find myself empathising with the husband as before he came across as a straight up stubborn-headed villain in this story.

Man, you are so talented, I hope you recognize that! I'm so impressed and that's coming straight from the heart, my bro! Now, on to the final part...

Pure excellence! :)

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OH MAN! This is huge! That's exactly what I wanted you to feel. From the title, it's a combination of 'sympathy' and 'symbiosis', and from the color Indigo, as you might've already found out in the POT O' GOLD, I wanted to convey compassion. So wow! Woohoo! Patting myself in the back for sure!

Everyone has their faults, and this is the chapter where I wanted everyone to be a solid gray area. Well, except for VI and XD, but at least 50% of the main cast! Haha!

I don't think I will ever recognize that, but that's why I have people like you to uplift me. It's funny, people always use the support of other people to "keep them grounded" but since I ground myself, the support of others "keep me uplifted" haha! Your words mean a lot, brother! Truly! No words would ever do justice for the appreciation I feel :D

I love this!

You've got my attention.

You're so creative!

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