Daydreaming

I'm awake,
half awake,
I've a dream that doesn't let me continue.

I feel a violent cold,
I close my eyes something slow,
I start dreaming.

In your smile I lose myself,
I fall into a coma while being sane,
I do not wake up again.

My body is very tense,
There is a problem that I think about,
it does not go away

I've already gone through something like that,
the feeling of stealing a kiss,
nothing resembles it.

For one of them I would be imprisoned,
expressing myself through the verse,
being behind a fence.

Although fortunately I'm still immersed,
painting your look on the canvas,
but this one is complex.

Well, it's only here in my mind, I could not look at it,
so I die slowly, unable to recover it.

There's a lot of background noise,
although I have deaf ears, I only hear your voice.

Little by little I drown in that deep glass,
I hide my suffering, I pray for you before God.

I get carried away by my thought,
I want to think that it's just an invention,
a great fantasy.

These are things that inside I feel,
I let it out and I lie,
here in my eternal poetry.

I'm still sitting in the waiting room,
although my mind is in a sphere,
a magical universe.

I keep dreaming without him sleeping,
pretending that inside you are not sick,
which is something tragic.

I open my eyes little by little,
and now is when I really start to wake up.

I enter the room and I touch you,
only by observing you I begin to see reality.

On the contrary you do not see me or hear me either,
You are one step away from mortality.

But although getting out of this one sounds crazy,
I am convinced that you will soon walk again.

And together...
A new life to begin.

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Hello I'm Edgar Noria, I'm 19 years old and I like to write sometimes.

This poem was write by me in a Odontological clinic while I was waiting for my turn to be attend for they.

If it liked you, please let me know it.
The Spanish version is better because has rhyme.

Spanish Version

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