BLOCK-CHAINS | Writing Contest initiated by @v4vapid | ONE-UPMANSHIP

in #blockchains-contest7 years ago (edited)

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BLOCK-CHAINS - Contest
In the latest edition of the 'Conspiracy Creative Writing Contest', I would like to hear your visions of dystopia on the blockchain, how cryptocurrencies could be used to imprison humanity or ways in which blockchain technology could be exploited to the benefit of a select few and to the detriment of the many.

Reading @v4vapid s post a story was forming. It wrote itself.
I guess, I bent the rules but can't help it.
Thank you for the inspiration!
Thank you @nobyeni for resteeming the contest.


ONE-UPMANSHIP

The drummers take up their positions.

You can hear them breathing in silence. One takes his djembe between his knees, the other one balances a twin drum on his thighs. The audience in expectation. After another pause, the fingers play a soft drum roll, the djembe has spoken. Maybe five seconds. The input sequence. Another break. Looking at each other, the twin drum releases the same vertebrae, only a little louder. Break. The djembe now in the second round, whirling plus simple rhythm. Break. Repeat the second sequence from the twins. Adding another one.

The introduction is told. With the main part of the story, the listeners are confronted with a powerful first strike, accompanied by semi-complex rhythmic tones. Now all sequences follow, continuously and reliably, one after the other, with ever newer and longer variants of beats.

The drummers move in harmony, accelerate, the audience, listening with bated breath, whether one doesn't stumble and lose the rhythm.
Beating hearts, shining eyes. Weighing bodies, tapping feet, nodding heads.
Let go, tense. Hold on, call.

Acceleration achieves a quality to which one feels helplessly exposed. Oh, my God, who's going to be missing, who's going to screw it up? The tension is rising. And rising.
One-upmanship demonstrating. And again, still adding to it.
Afterward, when it's all over, most people will wonder how this is possible. The drummers smile, wrinkle their foreheads and spur each other on. The audience becomes aware that it can't go much further.

Before the feared can happen, everything stops. The drumfire ends abruptly.

Off.

The final is reached, higher, faster and further is impossible.
Silence.
Then they clap, louder and louder. Their sounds return what they received.
The drummer's smile and bow.
Applause is finally coming to an end.

Someone's setting a log on fire. It creaks and crackles. Not much to say.

In the bushes, the noises start again.
Feather rustles, small feet run, something gets caught in a net.
In the ground, beings circle in spirals. Vibrations everywhere.

Somewhere else at another time someone formulates a hypothesis.

He is the only one in the lab. Mice rummaging around in their cages. His screen shows DNA codes.

You zoom out, you see him sitting in a huge building, thousands of windows mirroring other huge constructions who mirror further constructions. Buildings filled with assumptions, problems, and solutions. Millions of hypothesis being typed and worked on. Audiences listening. Clapping or frowning, going in, coming out. Going back and formulate a new question arising from the given answer. You zoom out and see a planet from outer space, deep down the blinking lights of illuminated streets of that part which rotates into the shades.

Zooming in:

Someone thinks about someone who created computer code

which created the wide web which created something called a Block-chain. Server running sucking up electrical food from energy generating constructions which replaced something called nature.

Someone thinks that someone did that on purpose.
Purpose-driven thoughts enter the web, bubbles of opinions cover the clouds.
Laws, contracts, transportation, logistics.

New solutions, new problems. New problems, new solutions.

Audience frowns, audience claps. Another bit another bite.

Zooming in: one father and one brother want to save the earth. They got money in the bank. The brother invests in space traveling, the father trades fiat. Fiat as a solution to former problems for goods & services which created new goods & services for other goods & services.

Someone thinks of evil of this goods.

Democracies, plutocracies, ecologies, biologies, economies, isms and prisons.
Groups and percentages, cryptocurrencies.

Someone thinks of decentralization, gathers, invests.

Others come in and go out. Virtuality and Reality. One cannot decide. One commits suicide the other decides on immortality. Problems and solutions. The fiat guy thinks of good of him, so does the Elon guy. While mothers being cut open to deliver the world with a baby. One comes in, one gets out. One-upmanship, One-upmanship.

Somewhere in the Universe stars leaving their signature of spheres.

Everything is in order. No problems, no solutions. Vibrations. Life comes, life goes.

Thank you for reading.


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I found it interesting in the sense of synchronicity, that the flowing energy of ideas could be intertwined and connected at vast distances.

Someone decides, another acts, another makes something come into being.

There is a mercenary undertone of the one-upmanship, but perhaps not meant to be dark? I'm unsure.

A good read, though.

Thank you for reading. I am glad this message came clear.

Yes, there is darkness in it. How else can it be? I am unable not to see more than one aspect of the events of life. I am referring to violence and complexity which can be celebrated and feared as well.

Tolle Geschichte! Dass Du gut schreiben kannst weiß ich ja mittlerweile :-)

Gar keine Gschaftlhuber diesmal? 👨‍💻

Danke dir. Aber sag mal ehrlich: hat sie was ausgelöst? Weil wenn nicht, dann denk ich, bin ich im Schreiben von Geschichten nicht besonders gut. Ich hatte mich schon manches Mal darin versucht & dachte bisher, dass sie wenn schon nicht herausragend, so doch ganz solide wären.

Ich bin auch überhaupt nicht böse über Kritik, sondern es würde mich wohl eher davon abhalten, weitere Geschichten zu posten und zu denken, es gäbe vielleicht doch ein Publikum dafür. Verstehst?

Möglich, dass ich auch Englische Geschichten lassen sollte, ich bin noch nicht ganz sicher.

Nah, keine Gschaftlhuber weit und breit. LOL!! :-)

Gerne :-) Hat Deine Geschichte was ausgelöst? Bei mir auf jeden Fall. Klingt auch immer noch nach. In der Scene am Anfang, konnte ich den "Sound" richtig spüren. Mir gefällt auch der Wechsel der Standpunkte und Blickwinkel.

Mit der Leserschaft ist es halt nicht so einfach. Es braucht Zeit, etwas zu lesen, das mehr als 10 Zeilen ist. Viele Leute nehmen sich die nicht. @talltim zum Beispiel hatte immer gute Geschichten geschrieben. Hat mich immer betrübt, dass er nicht mehr views und stimmen hatte. Schlißlich hat er aufgehört zu posten...

Mir würde es sehr gefallen, wenn Du in Deutsch schreiben würdest. Nach meiner eigenen Erfahrung, ist man in seiner Muttersprache immer etwas "persönlicher".

So, jetzt schau ich mir mal Deine 19 Fakten an. Dann gehts in ein eher hektisches WE... Ausstellung, mit vielen Künstlern. Bisschen wie Flöhe hüten 😜

Vielen lieben Dank, dass du noch mal meine Frage beantwortet hast.
Dir wünsche ich viel Inspiration und nen guten Austausch bei der Ausstellung! Und lass dir die Flöhe nicht zu sehr den Pelz jucken. LOL.

I think you shouldn't give up on the English. In contrast to some German writings I have come across yours does not betray a lack of confidence in English especially not when it is not translated but comes out fresh. (Trust me I am an English Foreign Language Teacher, with a knowledge of German!) Your style is atypically English that is true, but also what makes your writing out of the box. English writers tend to be more florid (Americans more conversational). Besides anybody who digs Alan Watts is somebody I want to read more of, German ok, but don't end up in the German niche entirely, it would be a waste.

How kind of you to give me a feedback. As you are a native speaker this means a lot. 'Cause I cannot have the same view on your language as you do. The thought popped also in my mind that it might be for this very reason "disturbing" and all that shakes a little has an effect. But insecurity gets me when I lack feedback.

Alan Watts is admired by me. His eloquent talks are fascinating and I am grateful that his voice remains in time and space.

I wrote an article about the "Wattsification of life". You wanna read it? I'll shoot you a link.

Thank you for tracking me. I will now have a look at your blog site.
Again, my pleasure meeting you!

Thank you for your visit to my post. I loved your comment which came to me after I had prepared my post for tomorrow, Monday. (Owing to too many unpleasantries of late, I am forced to tackle my project here on Steemit with some modified approaches. So it comes as a relief to hear your measured voice.) My unfinished work, currently is writing and several (esoteric) research projects and a definitive essay on Autism (and a couple of sweaters, a dress and a pair of new curtains). All of which I must consider artistic projects, since I have no qualifications. Here's to hoping one can be artistic without any qualifications!

I am starting to hope that I was sent here to write my last words ever and then retire to visual arts (before my eyes really give out on me). I am growing very very tired of trying to say anything worth listening to. I believe there comes a point when nothing much more can be said at all. I am also discovering how very religious I am turning out to be. Don't know what I am supposed to be tied to yet, but it may well proove not to be people!
Yes, please to the Wattsification of life. It is something I happen to be working on right now!

I understand.
Don't give up on people, though. How about limiting on those you can keep up with and establish a fruitful connection to?

I do understand you. Very much.

LOl. Whay you say about turning religious counts for me as well. I never thought of me being a religious person and yet, the older I get, I think that I was wrong about myself. But not to the point regretting anything.

Tiredness: yes. Time to rest. Time to feast on life.

Take good care of you and stay tuned to your many projects which seem to give you a lot.

Here the Watts-article though I think you already know everything I wrote:)

https://steemit.com/steemiteducation/@erh.germany/the-watts-ification-of-life

You're quite a writer! Respect Erika! Love to Germany

Many thanks. Though I am not sure if that is true.

oh, btw; I just made a posting where you can clearly see that I am a woman. LOL! :-) - and you got an invitation, too.

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