You got lots of potenital as seen in you first post. You should do your reintroduction post, if first one goes bad, but first wait it till the end. But essential is that you add verification picutre, here are two links for you to read.
https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@teamsteem/how-to-make-the-most-out-of-your-introduction-post
https://steemit.com/steemit/@steemship/take-two-re-doing-your-introductory-post-the-right-way