Writing exercise. Day 6: Extinctions happen

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There was a tiny world were the time was faster than ours and all the living was controlled by a machinery created by a scientist. He played everyday with the little world, looking at it with his microscope. He changed the climatological conditions as his will and rapidly, wrote the results of the tests. After a few months his curious mind got bored and started a new project. Slowly (or faster in the case of our time), the forms were developed and the evolution takes a lead role in the tiny world.


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Some beasts started to think in their creator. They didn’t know anything of him, but anyway decided to serve him. Some of them claimed he listen to the begs and needs of the habitants of the tiny world. While they form a strict doctrine and kill by his name, the scientist was totally focus in his family. He had a new son, and wanted to be with him, to raise him to become a greater man.

One day he remembered the tiny world so he got his microscope and examined it. He didn’t know what to expect. Had been a long time there, although some months in the life of the scientist. He hoped to discovered something beautiful but only saw pain. The shock was big, he didn’t like what the tiny world became. So he decided to clean up the mess, modifying the precipitation and drowning everyone. Not even a soul was left there, after his rage. Thus he could start all over. The plans that he had for the tiny world was brilliant: discover all the steps of the evolution machinery. And now, with the extinctions, he had a way of observe a variety of ways it could take.

Hey guys!

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If you wanted to find out what is the #WritingExercise about, here you got the link. I think it's a marvelous new experience. I hope I have written the story well.

Thanks @jeezzle for the idea.

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     7 years ago 

    Love how you have worked on the writing exercise of developing headline into a story. Amazing work. Here is another challenge that might work well:)
    https://steemit.com/365daysofwriting/@mydivathings/day-1-365-days-of-writing-challenge

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       7 years ago 

      Hey! Thanks a lot! Seems to be a great challenge and actually it's really sweet that you took the time to share it with me :) <3
      PS: I read the link when you commented, but I couldn't respond.

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