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RE: FROM THE DUST - PROLOGUE - PART ONE ~ THIS IS MY FIRST BOOK SO PLEASE OFFER UP YOUR SUPPORT!

in #writing6 years ago

@terminallyill
if I got it right we went from a battlefield to a place back into a disaster . we are looking back into the past .

who is looking back and when
the timeline from the battle to the present . but that can be clearer as the next chapter comes out

you cant read a little bit and have question answered . thats why you keep reading . its like a snapshot in time you don't get the picture until more is revealed . So i need more .
I would not make large correction until it is done then its the rewrite that sells . keep going 👍

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You got it right brother and I am happy that it makes you want to continue to go further on. I can assure you that the remainder of the prologue paints an even more vivid picture and will lead you to want to open the book and start chapter one. Thank you for taking the time to answer those questions for me bro!

@wolfhart, what is fast reply?

I feel like a mob boss after he just got out of a 30 year prison sentence SMH. Thanks for the links and info my brotha!

what do you mean, you feel "like" lol Good to have you back buddy!

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