The Lakes Where The Souls Dwell (Fiction With A Touch Of Science)

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You know how much I love reading with music...


Once upon a time there was a tribe living well hidden in a forest. The people of the forest were hunters and collectors. They relied on the land to get food, material for their tools and medicine. They were all hard-working and very, very obedient.

To whom?

But of course to the spirits of the forest.

The spirits were powerful and they would command nature at their will. Imagine a spirit getting mad at a tribesman because they killed their favored antelope, then a fierce bolt of lightning would tear the skies and burn the profane man to the ground. And as their ashes would fill up the air their blasphemy would be punished.

So the people were very cautious. 

The spirits were also in charge of the Lakes. The three crater lakes around the big volcano that rose tall above the settlement. That was the place where all the souls of the dead went. When a soul left its body, it would turn to ether and travel quickly towards the volcano where it would find its rightful place. 

Three Lakes, three kinds of people. The Good ones, the Evil and the Young. When a man died, the spirits would determine their destiny according to the man's life. If you had never wronged anyone or even done so but regreted it, you would be put in the Blue Lake. The Brown Lake was for the dirty souls, the men who had no compassion and love in their hearts. And the third one, the one standing alone farther up near the crater was destined for the innocent, the young souls that never made it to maturity. The unlucky who would never feel the warmth of a kiss, the pounding of a heart in love, the trembling of a body in ecstasy. All the children, all the juveniles, all those whose life journey was cut abruptly. 

It is said that hundreds of years ago this Lake had flooded. A terrible plague had killed dozens of children. Every house was mourning. Every mother had lost at least one child. Every father had wept for losing a descendant. The souls were just too many that the basin could not hold them and the water started getting out. As it dripped down the volcano it approached the other two Lakes, went past them and reached the foot of the mountain. It mixed with the tears of the mothers and watered the ground. 

Then the ashes from the volcano filled up the skies. A thick plume covered the air and the sun hid behind it. Everyone breathing it in fell asleep instantly. And in their sleep they met with the all the kids that had passed away. Children, siblings, cousins, friends, everyone was there. The spirits felt sorry for those people's loss and offered them one last present, they let them say goodbye. 

When the people woke up, the village had changed. Weeds were everywhere. Spiderwebs had covered all the huts and some of the people too. How long had they been out? It didn't matter they were spared moments with their loved ones, they could afford losing moments of routine. And after that, they went on with their lives, but never forgot those who left.

That was the story Jun remembered from his grandfather. And now that his grandfather was gone Jun felt so sad. He missed him. He missed the stories. He missed him patting Jun on the head every time his father would tell him off. He missed him teaching him how to make spears and arrows for hunting and telling him how good he was at it, even though he wasn't. Jun could now make beautiful arrows, deadly for any unlucky animal that would meet them, but a true work of art. That's why the whole village respected him and talked highly of his skills.

So Jun made a desicion, he would climb up to the Lakes just one last time to show his grandfather how he had mastered his art. He would bring his best blades with him as a thank you for all the lessons he wholeheartedly offered his grandson.

Jun set off at dawn. He had wrapped all his gifts in a piece of thick, blue cloth. Blue was his grandfather's favorite color. He started walking the path to the Lakes, a path no man would dare cross for fear of disturbing the peace of the dead. 

After having walked for at least three hours, he made it to the first Lakes. His grandfather had to be in one of them, Jun believed he was in the Blue one, such a good man he was. Jun looked around and marvelled at the color of the Lake as the bright sun casted its light upon the calm surface of the waters. He stepped closer, kneeled in respect and took his package off his back to place it on the rim of the Lake.

There he wept:

- You see how good I am now? You see how good you made me? You see how everyone down there respects and praises me?

His tears fell on the sharp blades. One drop was split in two and slipped in the Lake and there he saw him. He saw his grandfather's face reflecting on the surface, but it was not coming from the inside. He turned to his right and he could see him kneeling next to him. The pat on his head and a wide smile of pride. A hug, arms around his shoulders. The smell, the scent of wood and metal he distinctively remembered. And then nothing but rocks and a big blue Lake in front of him.

Jun cried. He curled up on the ground with his back against the rocks of the rim and slept there for a while. And in his dreams he was a child again, in his grandfather's workshop learning how to sharpen blades...


Image credits: commons.wikimedia.org - Author: Rosino - License: CC BY 2.0


Nature is the best inspiration!

The story you just read has been inspired by the Kelimutu Crater Lakes, the lakes that change color according to the mood of the spirits... 

Come on, I'll show you!

The lakes are located in the Kelimutu National Park (Flores Island, Indonesia). Kelimutu is a volcano. Three lakes are found on the volcanic mountain, the two being like "siamese twins" (separated by a rocky wall) and the third one being a bit farther. The magic of these lakes lies on their ability to change colors. Shades range from blue, turquoise, green, red, brown or even black.

The locals did believe that those Lakes became the home of the souls after people died. The westernmost one, Tiwu Ata Bupu, was the Lake of Old People and is usually blue. The "siamese" lakes are Tiwu Ko'o Fai Nuwa Muri or the Lake of Young Men and Maidens and is usually green; the other one is Tiwu Ata Polo, the Bewitched or Enchanted Lake, that is usually red in color.

Why does this miracle happen?

As wikipedia suggests, it's because of the "adjustments in the oxidation-reduction status of the fluid of each lake, and also considering the abundance of different major elements, such as iron and manganese". In plain english, volcanic gases get absorbed through the lake waters as they try to make it out of the underground. In combination with rainwater that falls in the lakes, they can change the oxidation-reduction levels regularly. The color of each lake is also different probably because of the different mineral concentration levels, as these elements react with the escaping volcanic gases they change the color of the waters. Although the first explanation is more accurate.


Image from the public domain, source: commons.wikimedia.org

References

wikipedia.org
indonesia.travel
mybestplace.com

Thank you so much for your time!

Until my next post,
Steem on and keep smiling, people!

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Hey, the Gulf of Corinth, in front of me, changes colors too! I guess that's because of once upon a time..................

The God of the Seas fell in love with a beautiful Maiden sailing across the Gulf. The Maiden was promised to a king of a foreign land, a marriage of political value purely.

- How will I make her mine?, he thought... I should threaten to sink this ship and drown all the crew, send the wedding gifts deep in my chest of treasures and keep this woman for myself, for all eternity. She will be my Queen. I will be her King. If she says no I will just kill everyone on board!

On that night the Maiden couldn't sleep. She was on deck, looking at the dark sky all decorated with sparkly spots, stars they were called. The waters were calm and she felt relaxed despite her anxiety about the upcoming wedding.
All of a sudden the ship rocked violently and a huge water sprout popped up in front of her surprised eyes.

- Oh Gods, we are going to die! she yelled.

As white as a sheet she turned and there he saw the mighty God of the Seas in front of her, tall and strict in all his glory.

- You will come with me, be my royal Queen, rule the Seas beside me, receive my love and affection and all my godly power and protection. Say no and I will send this ship to the bottoms of the Abyss! Say yes and live for ever on the floors of the Sea!

He practically gave her no other choice. A promised wedding was her destiny after all, what difference would it make whether it be in a far away kingdom or deep beneath the waters? She was promised to a stranger husband, a stranger husband-to-be was already in front of her. Powerful, terrifying, ruthless.

- All right! All right! You can take me down with you. Just promise not to hurt anyone else.
- My sweet bride, a God keeps his word like the Seas know to keep their secrets.

And just like that she got on the mast, spread her arms wide and took the plunge into the terrifying spinning waterwhirl. As she was sinking, she could feel the water around her turning into to strong arms and closing her safe inside them. Down at the bottom the waterwhirl was now her Husband, God of the Seas, her Protector, her Ruler, her Man.
And there she lived and learnt all the mysteries of the Seas. She learnt to control the waters and let sailors sail safe, and that's when the waters were clear and blue. But when she saw the pirates and smugglers her rage would turn them black and storms would rise and sink the outlaws into a liquid cemetery prison.
And when she made love to her King, early at sunrise or late during sunset, the waters would take a sweet red, orange and golden color...

So now you know the story of the Corinthean Gulf :P

No wonder the sea outside of my windows changes colors!

But one question.......did they live happily ever after or did they have to work out a lot of marital problems?

You tell me! How often do you see the waters raging and whipping the shores? ;)

You are trying to hide or white wash something!

Because you already attributed the raging seas to higher motives: "But when she saw the pirates and smugglers her rage would turn them black and storms would rise..."

Hahaha! You got me!
Ok, she might do it whenever she and her husband had a little fight, but you can't tell people that. It ruins the romantic mystery, just like routine... That's why we have magic after all, to make our routines more bearable :)

I don't know. I kinda lean towards the old: "The truth shall set you free" line of thought. Romanticizing family life means that all kinds of creepy habits/compulsions/secrets get passed down generation to generation :-)

You can't romanticize everything nor should you, we don't live in a pink bubble made of cotton candy. But you can use some fantasy to "beautify" the dullness from time to time. At least that's what I think :)

Beautiful storytelling. I could not have guessed that this was a science post but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I seem to be losing my ability to tell a story but this helps. Thanks.

Thanks, it was not very"sciency" but it sure gets you intrigued to want to learn more about Kelimutu. You have to agree, if we were taught science this way at school, less children would find it boring :P

Exactly! And I could tell that you still had some steam in you to keep going :)

Again a very beautiful story @ruth-girl is really always great to read. And then the history of the Gulf of Corynthe, wow, all too well ...

Thank you @marie2018!! I had lots of inspiration yesterday :P

Only ? No, you have always a lot of inspiration I think. Full imagination and that is wonderful @ruth-girl

Oh! You make me blush! Thank you! ^_^

Really enjoy your post, you would be great to teach history too! Great post and loooooove the music. Nature gives us all, air to breathe, what to eat and inspiration to write. In beatiful souls like yours nature finds its way to tell us everything, wisdom, beauty, compassion, love..... Thanks for share! Have a nice day.

Thank you!!
I'm happy you liked it!

Have a nice day too!! :)

Writing stories like this takes a lot of talent. That part where Jun cried really left some moisture on my chin. That's what a good story and nature do to you.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!
I actually had my grandpa's photo on my desk to think about while writing, I think he was watching me and this story is somehow dedicated to him :)

incredible photographic appreciation and history about this famous volcano and lakes, although its last eruption was in 1968 is very famous for the so inesplicable form of the color changes that scientifically explain that it is by the combination of vapors and gases that come from within but even so it's amazing how this happens, how do you define it?

Thank you for reading @marlongonzalez! :)

Personally, although the explanation may be simple, I still see it as a miracle of nature! :)

What a great story!
The supernatural is indeed natural.

It is indeed! Thank you! :)

This is incredible,the magic of lake is colurful that uplift your soul.

Thank you! :)

Wow breathtaking! I absolutely love it! Great writing skills too

Thank you! :)

miracles are Gods doing they happen when the have to be anytime anywhere, any moment in life... brilliant story indeed enjoyed reading the fiction 😊

Thank you! :)

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