my sad country
National
How many years have you been sad?
Full of chaos
And your people are sad
How many orphans
Without a certain
How many displaced people
Huge years
It's you
Kill nostalgia
National
You are a hostage
However hybrid
I am stoned
A humiliating crusher
He wrote about us
we both
We live in
Under hybrid
National
I decided to go back
I have tears
I will start my fight
Against the traitors
Peace be with you
my sad country
Nice poem! I used to write poems too! Seeing yours makes me want to try again :)
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ah thnx
I am glad that I have prepared for you the desire of writing
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I like it! But maybe you should let someone proof read it, i get the feeling some of the meaning gets lost in translation. I am willing to help with that if you want it.
oh thnx welcome
Well, if you want you can find me on discord: TwoFlower#1887 I can proofread for you.
Please i did not see the descod link
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Nice write up you got there i love this. Hope that one day i can write better