Day 787: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: only what we could carry
While doing business with her friend Mrs. Mildred York, Mrs. Selene Slocum-Lofton encountered another of the high-net-worth Ridgeline Fire survivors – Mr. Joseph Chase, who seemed very down on the corner of Main and Market Streets in Big Loft, VA.
“Buck up, Joe – what is the matter?” Mrs. Slocum-Lofton said, and Mr. Chase sighed.
“I was just thinking about the wife and I; she can't stop crying and I can hardly stop. We thank you for for organizing the evacuation, but you know, we got out with only what we could carry, which really wasn't very much. A whole life, gone up in smoke.”
Mrs. Slocum-Lofton was weary of all such conversations, but recognized that most people simply were not as ruthless about living as she was at 83. So, she went into mother-tone before setting Mr. Chase straight.
“If your whole life has gone up in smoke, who is this handsome young fellow telling me about it?”
Mr. Chase cracked a smile.
“Well, I'm not young,” he said.
“If you smiled, you have an ego like most men, and compared to me, you're young – and don't you know not to contradict your elders? To be that much messed up, you've got to be alive, so stop this gloom and doom. Your important stuff wasn't at the Blue Ridge house anyway.”
The smile got wider.
“I'm so glad Mary insisted we keep the summer house lightly furnished,” he said.
“Exactly,” Mrs. Slocum-Lofton said. “I mean, you have lost one of six houses, and it was gorgeous, but … .”
Which is why Mrs. Slocum-Lofton was tired of these conversations.
“You would think the world has come to an end with these people,” she said to Mrs. Mildred York, “like they had lost all their income properties or something, or like someone important to them died. All depressed over a house they spend exactly one month a year in – one month! We are well out of our neighborhood, Mildred, believe me – too much time spent sitting around with people who don't know the value and measure of things is not good for old people like us!”
“So, what are we going to do, Selene?”
“I plan on buying an apartment building somewhere here downtown and moving in – where things are happening! We'll keep the house on Jonathan Lofton Avenue, of course – I enjoy your company, and of course we'll have to entertain over there when necessary. But the richest parts of Big Loft have to yet be rebuilt – clean-up, infrastructure, landscaping, construction – in addition to the city being desperate for revenue to deal with lawsuits coming from the stupid side of the Pendleton Prison scheme. Nine local banks may break. This is the place to be for the wealth creator!”
“And look, they even have a church down here,” Mrs. York said, noticing the Church in the Midst of Life sign on the corner of Main and Straight Street.
“Hmmmm... .” Mrs. Slocum-Lofton said as she noticed the people going to and fro. “They have a lot going on there, for a weekday … .”
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#Loveit! This story is full of surprises. I think I have this woman pegged:
She is more enterprising than I'd have imagined. So is Mrs. York.
They have their priorities in order!
Oh, Mrs. Slocum-Lofton is something else ... she features as a late-coming but dominating supporting role in a huge section of this story called The Posture of Innocence, which you can expect on Kindle late this or early next week ... Mrs. York is there too, as a passive sidekick ... late in the story you will meet these two survivors of the Ridgeline Fire just before the fire ... but for now, enjoy them doing "Main Street" and realize: they aren't even good and started yet ...
You are brilliant - with a cast of characters inside your head, ready to come out and play, so to speak, as soon as you set that 5-minute timer. I love how you write - and how WELL you write - you're truly a pro, a master! And I'm looking forward to the books. I have one in my Kindle now. More to come!!
Look forward to The Posture of Innocence and The Field of Blood ... supposed to have been the 20th, but I was sick an entire week ... by year end, Lord willing!
Thank you for the purchase ... I am further behind than I thought, and so The Posture of Innocence will be delayed at least until next month, but it IS coming!
Oh I have GOT to get caught up on your writings! I love them so much.
I'm here to deliver the Tuesday prompt so please write us another!
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The Posture of Innocence will be out on Kindle this week or next week, so that might help -- the thing ran 52 days in about 110 parts, so it might be easier to do it that way ... meanwhile, I'm down to posting up about once a day again, so it will be easier until I get to the next big installment ...