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RE: AJAX Tarnished, Book 1 of the AJAX Chronicles... Part 2: From Cough To Nightmare, Chapter 4
Especially since he didn’t even want to be the front man to the choice. I feel like I would probably have done the same, but it would be tough.
Yes, he has a family to think of. It takes a strong man to do this. The tension is palpable in this chapter.
That’s what it’s all about. Creating the tension to tie someone to the story before pulling the rug out or extending the saving hand.
You do an awesome job of it... I can't wait to read the next installment.