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RE: AJAX Tarnished, Book 1 of the AJAX Chronicles... Part 2: From Cough To Nightmare, Chapter 4
Yes, he has a family to think of. It takes a strong man to do this. The tension is palpable in this chapter.
That’s what it’s all about. Creating the tension to tie someone to the story before pulling the rug out or extending the saving hand.
You do an awesome job of it... I can't wait to read the next installment.