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RE: AJAX Tarnished, Book 1 of the AJAX Chronicles... Part 2: From Cough To Nightmare, Chapter 4
I can imagine how hard that would be. I love the details on the factory. I can't wait for the next installment. <3
Especially since he didn’t even want to be the front man to the choice. I feel like I would probably have done the same, but it would be tough.
Yes, he has a family to think of. It takes a strong man to do this. The tension is palpable in this chapter.
That’s what it’s all about. Creating the tension to tie someone to the story before pulling the rug out or extending the saving hand.
You do an awesome job of it... I can't wait to read the next installment.