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RE: #DolphinSchool Boot Camp

in #writing7 years ago

Thank you very much for the feedback and constructive criticism! I often struggle with my word selection. I have too many to use! hahaha So, I am not surprised with that correction. My dad taught me, being the drummer he was, that sometimes Less Is More! I have yet to master that skill... but it's something I need to work on for sure!

My struggle is feeling the need to over or under explain things! Visually, as an artist, it's easier for me to grasp layouts... but writing is more difficult to access, for me. When is enough enough? I fear sharing too little or too much and end up less concise either way!

In the assignments coming in the days ahead I will be more subtle in my incorporation of the Boot Camp. I thought Day 1 would be perfect to introduce the program and give a foundation for the next ten days. The subtlety will be easier now that I feel I have explained what is going on! I may have been doing that mostly for my own sake! hahah

Looking forward to Day 2 and applying the knowledge and correction in the posts to come!
Keep Up The Great Work Yourself
Mister Miagi

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