I am a Mouse, Hear me Squeak! (Whatsup writing contest entry)

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

Yesterday I was busy looking for food when suddenly I hear a shrill sound.

What? Where is that sound coming from?



I look around and see something big. This creature has been coming and going here and I wonder why? I look up and stare at it. It stares back at me.

I can hear my stomach but somehow this creature is trying to intimidate me. Oh no, this is my territory. I will not move from where I am.

Waitaminit. I need to eat.



So I move, but then it moved too!

What? Is it mocking me?





Look at the size of that. Must get away. Lemme go this way. Oh hot hot hot. Where to go without this creature disturbing me? Hmmm. I stop to think.

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Suddenly I see something coming my way.

Oh run for your life...!





klanggggg

skitter skitter hide

What was that?

I hear the creature moving farther and farther away.





Oh it is gone! Okay so where's the food?





I sniff the air and I'm off.








Oooh boy, I had some nice food the other day, I wonder where else I can find some food? Maybe that creature has food. I know where it lives! Hahaha!

Lemme check.

Now where was it... oh yeah I go through here... and then here... and then... "Squeak!"













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Oh there's that sound again.

freeze





I guess no food here...



Gotta eat.



scuttle skittle dee











The end.




















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The formatting does give the story an excellent pacing, pretty well done. Perhaps I will copy your approach :-)

Haha I just had fun with it. Thanks! 👍

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Nice formatting, i like the story

Thank you. 👍

This story is receiving Honorable Mention and 1 SBD thank you for playing

Oh, thanks. 👍

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