Word Poetry Challenge#:16|Patience

in #wordchallenge6 years ago (edited)

My entry to @jassennessaj poetry contest for the week.

Want to participate then click it here: Wordchallenge #:16

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Patience is a burning candle.
Once its lighted, all you can handle.
If its over, all will burts out.
The burden hearts become free.

Strong and weak need it.
Patience is a virtue as may say.
We can't afford to lose,
for who gets angry easy is a loser.

Breath in, breath out.
Step back, you there who carry heavy loads.
When the test is hard.
Learn to wait before laying it down.
One day that becomes lighter when your numb.

If caught in a long line,
waiting for your ride.
Steel yourself, jeeps take longer to arrive.
If you can't then take a taxi,
and pay higher price.
Its always a matter of willingness.
Either you give it a time or give it up.

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Amazing! Thanks for joining this contest @amayphin :)

thank you, sadly a reality of my day to day commuting life!

A compelling entry. Good luck! :)

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