@amosbastian created a quiz a few weeks ago, and I appeared to be one of the answers to the question "moderator with the highest review" this might be because of my longevity on utopian as a moderator and the interest I have in reviewing as well as the effort I put in reviewing.
This is your opening sentence. It's not a sentence. It's a paragraph. This should be two sentences, at the very least.
Also, you didn't appear to be one of the answers. You were one of the answers. One way "appeared" makes sense would be if you wrote "my name appeared as one of the answers."
I could remember clearly when @knowledges used to knock my DM
You "could"? You CAN. Also... knock my DM? Is that a euphemism? It sounds super dirty. And with under 5,000 google results, I'm gonna say it's not common enough to be an accepted usage of any of these words.
These are just examples from the start of the post. My recommendation to anyone who isn't an experienced writer is this: Write simply and clearly.
I love people who want to learn. Example ahoy!
This is your opening sentence. It's not a sentence. It's a paragraph. This should be two sentences, at the very least.
Also, you didn't appear to be one of the answers. You were one of the answers. One way "appeared" makes sense would be if you wrote "my name appeared as one of the answers."
You "could"? You CAN. Also... knock my DM? Is that a euphemism? It sounds super dirty. And with under 5,000 google results, I'm gonna say it's not common enough to be an accepted usage of any of these words.
These are just examples from the start of the post. My recommendation to anyone who isn't an experienced writer is this: Write simply and clearly.
Wow, thank you!
I believe you will cite some improvement in my next post.