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RE: Secure you eyes & sleep comfortably at night with Red-Moon; An android screen filter app for night time phone use.
Hello! The errors I spotted are not that significant, but I will cite a few examples:
Naturally, our mobile devices, emit blue light.
No need to add a second comma there. This sentence should read: "Naturally, our mobile devices emit blue light."
This review would be a little different than others I've published.
This sentence should read: "This review will be a little different than others I've published."
So my review would be a way to explain how the app works.
Let me rephrase that: "So my review will be an attempt to explain how the app works."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a good day!
Thanks @lordneroo. This error of will or would is quite confusing. Sometimes, my state of mind when creating these articles run through the present and past. When I positioned myself in the article, it sounds like I'm mostly correct when I say would, instead of will. Sometimes try to review my article as though you wrote it. You'll understand me better. Thanks. Hope you had a great day?