RE: Secure you eyes & sleep comfortably at night with Red-Moon; An android screen filter app for night time phone use.
Hello, @harry-heightz!
Thank you for your contribution. I am a huge fan of this project, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to promote it with an extensive blog post. Screen filter apps are very useful, especially for people who spend long hours staring at a screen, and this particular app provides users with a wide range of useful features.
As always, you did an amazing job on the content side. You managed to compose a very informative review that contains vast amounts of information about this project, and your content is unique and editorial. Keep up the good work.
That said, the post did have minor proofreading issues, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. Let me know if you would like me to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment.
To sum up, this is another great review from you. I appreciate your commitment to quality.
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Thanks for your review @lordneroo. You can cite examples of my errors. I can find one in my title.
Hello! The errors I spotted are not that significant, but I will cite a few examples:
No need to add a second comma there. This sentence should read: "Naturally, our mobile devices emit blue light."
This sentence should read: "This review will be a little different than others I've published."
Let me rephrase that: "So my review will be an attempt to explain how the app works."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a good day!
Thanks @lordneroo. This error of will or would is quite confusing. Sometimes, my state of mind when creating these articles run through the present and past. When I positioned myself in the article, it sounds like I'm mostly correct when I say would, instead of will. Sometimes try to review my article as though you wrote it. You'll understand me better. Thanks. Hope you had a great day?
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!