Original Song and Photos - Paul Hallman - Mountains

Hello fellow Steemians. I haven’t posted an original song since my first post, with Dirty Games. I’m having a blast doing phone recordings of acoustic covers for @luzcypher’s Open Mic Night, and I also have a few studio recordings of covers (I’ve posted one of those so far, at https://steemit.com/music/@paulhallman/like-spinning-plates-paul-hallman-radiohead-cover). But of course recording my songs is the main focus for me. Which is great, since we have @thirstyrecords, @jessamynorchard and the #originalmusic tag she’s started, and now @steemradio supporting songwriters here on Steemit.

Mountains

If Dirty Games was an exercise in cynicism, then Mountains is its naive polar opposite. Which makes sense, since I wrote Dirty Games four or so years ago, and Mountains when I was 18. It’s been recorded a couple of times, first on my 4-track tape recorder with my band right before I left for basic training, and again all by myself right before I got out of the Army (with some really cheesy MIDI drums and a groove that was all over the place). This recording I’m posting here is the first time in 20 years that I’ve gotten this song to sound the way I want it to. With my new studio, I can actually PLAY the drums instead of doing it on my keyboard, and I’m getting ever closer to the polished sound I’m looking for (I’m really stubborn and have decided to learn to master my own recordings rather than send them out for mastering). And the groove for this song has always eluded me. It was never sure what it wanted to be. I would swing it on some instruments and play it straight on others, thinking I could get some kind of unique lazy 16th note swing groove. It never worked. So now it just plain swings, at a very slow tempo. Do you know how hard it is to swing and lock in all the instruments in layers on a 69 bpm song? I didn’t, and if I didn’t always feel like songs are “telling” me what they want to be rather than me making decisions, I would have sped it up or something. There’s a LOT of space between the notes at 69 bpm, which makes it hard to nail down a swing or shuffle groove. I’m not sure nature meant for swing grooves to be that slow. But as I’ve said before, I apparently have a penchant for doing things the hard way. And the song has always been meant to be lazy, spaced-out sounding. The extra slow groove accentuates that. It took longer to record than any of the others I’ve done so far, but I’m happy with it. Finally.

Actual Mountains

This seems like a good opportunity to show some of my photos of mountains from around the U.S. Most were taken with a point-and-shoot while I was in trucker training, but once I got my own truck and was making good money I got a DSLR. Unfortunately being on my own meant I couldn’t sit in the passenger seat and take photos, so my photo production on the road dropped drastically with the DSLR.



Salt Lake, Utah

It’s been a really long time since I’ve been out of the country. I’ve seen some beautiful places, and I look forward to traveling overseas again at some point. But I don’t know how many Americans realize how diverse and beautiful our own scenery and cultures are. I didn’t, or at least I never really gave it much thought, until I had a job that had me in several states a day. There’s so much hate and violence and intolerance going on, but there’s so much to love, and the potential to be as great as we like to think we are. To be American is to be part of a rich tapestry of cultures - many from other countries, and some that are very uniquely American in origin, but none are less American than any other. Driving around the U.S. is like driving through different countries, and there are good people in all of them. Even the Northeast. 😃



Virginia



Pennsylvania



California



Wyoming, calm after several hours of driving through a windstorm



San Francisco



Utah



California



Arizona



Utah

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Gave me a kind of Bob Dylan vibe, except Paul Hallman style. Loving it man, oozing with talent!

Thanks @senseiteekay! Funny you should say that. When I wrote that I didn't know much about Bob Dylan, but now he's one of my very favorite songwriters. I love playing Dylan, and I'll be posting some soon.

"one more cup of coffee for the road" - Dylan

Ooh. Great idea @norbu, I think I might learn that one!

Wow nice music there, even complete with visual accompaniment to complete the mood. Really good vibes going on :)

To add: great work on the drums, I don't think that's easily achievable even with the many groove functions on keyboard / daw!

Thank you, @kevinwong! Yeah, I don't have the patience for programming or editing MIDI. I hated when I had to do that to record drums. Now I have a MIDI set, so I can play for real and just edit the missed triggers (my hi hat doesn't handle open and close combos very well, so I always have to fix those) and the occasional oopsie. It took several weeks of practice for me to be able to play this, as I'm not a pro drummer.

Really enjoyed this post Paul. Not only some beautiful photos and musings, but a solid original song too.

I like the way the song develops with a nice lead in and building up does give the feel of driving along through some beautiful scenery which goes perfect with your photos. I heard the Dylan vibe in there too but also some Jacob Dylan in the mix. Have you listened to Wallflowers as well?

I know what you mean about traveling the US. I'm from the US originally, Northeast in fact, but I lived in the south a while too to balance it out :) . I have been living in Europe for many years and still much to see here, though I've got it on my wish list to travel the US much more.

Thank you @dreamstream! All I know from The Wallflowers is whatever they did that was popular in the 90's, and I can't even remember what that was now. I'll have to check them out.

I haven't been to Europe yet. I've always wanted to go. Where in Europe are you? Where in the Northeast are you from? I love New York. I drove by Sleepy Hollow a million times, but never could visit. It's on my list. I like Maine a lot, too. Hell, even Jersey is beautiful outside the cities.

Yeah the 90's songs are what stick with me too, like 5th Avenue Heartache (which maybe reminded me of the organ in your song).

I live outside of Brussels, Belgium... grew up part in central NJ and part in Pittsburgh.

Oy. Two of my least favorite places to drive a truck. To be fair, my list of least favorite places to drive is pretty long. But two of my most memorable heart attack moments happened in Jersey, and another in Pittsburgh. NJ is so pretty in the fall, though. Brussels, though - man, that sounds like the life.

Great song, man! Hope you do more like this :D

Thank you @rafaellira! I'm working on it! :-)

@ paulhallman sorry about the offtopic but we have news for you.... Thank you!

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