A Blessing and a Curse - Tell a tale contest!

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In the middle of the storm she stood, with her eyes as cold as ice for her heart was left unthawed.

Chapter I

For years and years, the war raged on that she grew accustomed to it. She had led many armies to victory with her incomparable control of magic. Rylai, the Crystal Maiden, as many would refer to her, was a strong warrior who possessed every characteristic of a great leader. On one snowy night, right after celebrating Rylai’s yet another victory, she went out with a glass of beer and sat in the soft snow. The smile on her face quickly faded as she mumbled “Traxex, hicc Aiushtha, Naix, , Rexxar...” and the list went on. She carried the burden every warrior endured, the pain of seeing the weak fall against the powerful. The night was silent and nothing could be heard aside from the wind and Rylai’s sorrowful voice, when a hooded figure appeared in the middle of the storm with only its unknown emblem visible. Rylai stood in defensive stance and with a blink of an eye, the soft snow was turned into sharp icicles barely an inch from impaling the intruder’s chest.

“Fear not, I only intend to have a glass of cold beer” the hooded figure said calmly. “Someone of your kind has no business here. Go, before I decide you’re not worthy of my mercy” Rylai replied. The hooded figure let out a smile and with a single incantation, the ice melted instantaneously. “You do not want to fight me, Maiden. And I do not want to fight you. It’d be a shame if I would have to fight a lady as fair as you.” Rylai hurriedly launched a counter attack which the hooded figure dismissed almost immediately. “You are no match for me, Maiden, at least for now. You are strong, but you are no match for what you are about to face. If you want to protect your people, you have to become stronger to overcome your limits.” Seeing the worried face of Rylai, the hooded figure reassured her “Worry not for my intentions are pure. I do not wish to cause havoc to your people and to you, my greatest ally.” Stunned with what she have seen and heard, Rylai watched the hooded figure walk towards the lively bar. Before entering the room, the hooded figure turned and said “Fight with no regrets, Maiden. Remember their names but never regret, for these people have shown the greatest sacrifice a hero could ever make for the sake of the people. Remember their names for they are true heroes. Off I go now. Take care... Rylai.” Tears ran down Rylai’s cold cheeks. And before she realized it, she was down on her knees sobbing uncontrollably.

Rylai woke up in her bed the next day with her head throbbing with pain. “Ugh, I might have drunk too much.” she gruntled. She was confused whether the hooded figure was real or it was all a dream. Regardless if it was a dream or not, the unidentified emblem was burned in her mind. She had read books in attempt to find any information regarding the emblem; but to her dismay, she found none. She recalled the names like she does every day; but this time, she did it with acknowledgement and respect rather than regret. Days have passed yet it seemed only yesterday that she had met the hooded figure. Like any other day, Rylai fought battles after another and she never failed to win each one of them.

During Rylai’s battle against the Scourge, she was informed with great urgency that the enemy forces have held the citizens hostage. Her judgement was clouded with anger. “How low can they get!” Rylai exclaimed. With strong urge to help the weak, Rylai fled immediately to protect her people, leaving the front line to her most trusted and skilled warriors. She flew against the wind to get back to the town as quickly as she could. “Welcome back, Maiden!” “You’re back early.” “Won another battle, I suppose?” the townspeople greeted her enthusiastically. “Is everyone alright?” Rylai asked relentlessly. “With your kind protection, how can we not be?” answered an old woman with a warm smile. She found the prickling cold wind hard to breathe. She couldn’t feel her limbs and for the first time in years, she felt fear. Not for herself, but for her army as she have left them unprotected in the hands of a traitor.

She flew back to the battlefield only to see dozens of her men have fallen while the rest stood petrified. “Your kindness might be your downfall, Maiden.” said the young man while sitting on the pile of unconscious bodies. “You’re too kind.” he added. With a flick of a finger, Rylai summoned a snow storm. Sharp icicles rapidly formed and was launched against the man. The young man did no effort to evade the attack, instead he tried to block it but it was futile for the attack was too strong. “Is this how you repay a good samaritan? Your people should know how much of a witch you are...” the man said catching his breath. “I’m impressed you took that attack lightly as most would’ve been unconscious for hours.” Rylai replied preparing for the finishing attack. “I’m not the one you should be giving a storm of icicle, Maiden.You had traitors amongst your army. I simply put them to sleep before they caused trouble for the great Crystal Maiden.” the young man replied as quickly as he could before Rylai decides to shut him up. The young man stood up and brushed the snow off his shoulders. “Luckily for you, I’m not like ‘most’ man. Otherwise, killing an innocent man who only intended to help will eat up your guilt.” said the young man. “We will meet again, Maiden. And I’m hoping that you won’t shower me with icicles next time we meet.” and just like that, the young man vanished.

After a thorough investigation regarding the incident, the traitors were sent behind the bars, never to see the sun again. Rylai was more careful on who she lets stay by her side for her army was almost in grave danger because of her lack of judgment. The young man was still unknown to her for he was not seen again after the incident. The town was once again celebrating for the capture of the traitors. No one but the army and Rylai knew about the mysterious young man as Rylai asked them to keep it a secret. An unknown entity will only cause the townspeople to worry. All was well until the laughters and cheerful singing were drowned out by the deafening bells which was an indicator of danger. The townspeople was silenced for they have not heard the bell for the longest time as Rylai was always one step ahead of the enemy. “Falter not! I will discuss the matters with the council. I offer my sincerest apology but the celebration will be cancelled. Please return to your homes calmly.” Rylai reassured them when a sudden bolt of lightning covered the sky, illuminating the entire town followed by a roaring thunder. Tremors were felt and screams were heard everywhere. “Please return to your homes!” Rylai ordered firmly. Trusting the Crystal Maiden with their lives, the townspeople went back to their houses guided by the army leaders. The lively town has become empty as the townspeople have settled in their houses.Everything was still and quiet until the bells were heard again. When a messenger from the council was sent for Rylai, she was certain that what ever caused the lightnings and roaring thunders pose a great threat not only to the town, but also to the entire kingdom. “Come with me Rylai, the council have requested you.” the messenger said as Rylai obediently complied with the council’s request.



Heya guys!

I'm not very good at writing stories but I'm hoping you liked it! I was going for a short story but I didn't want to rush the ending and I have around 700+ words left to come up with an ending (since the maximum words for the short story was 2,000) soo I took the novel route :D

The story was made for @tpkidkai's Tell A Tale Contest! I had this Crystal Maiden drawing waiting to be posted when saw kuya tp's Tell A Tale Contest, so I gave it a go! I haven't tried writing stories, I just keep my stories in my mind :) And as always, steemit made me do something I haven't done before~ \o/ Sorry for some grammatical mistakes as English is not my first language :)

The drawing was originally made by me and will be provided with a step by step process on a separate post ~


Disclaimer: Although the names are the same with the heroes from Dota/Dota 2, the story is not related to any lore. I'm just really bad at making cool names >_<



That's about it!


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I hope you guys enjoyed this one as well!
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very nice story, kothy ! and i look forward to the separate post for the pretty piccar <3

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Thank you @veryspider! n_n I will post it soon!

Great story!!!🤟🏼

I nominated thia post to be featured in #76 SFP daily featured post. Hopefully they’ll like it! I know they will.

All the best ❤️

Thank you po ate! I'm glad you liked it hehe ♥

There you go my RYLAI :)

With matching story pa ate @itsjessamae! haha

uu nga! hahaha

Wow! Baby girl, you're not just a good artist, you're also great at writing! This is soooooo good! 😍

Thank you po! I'm really happy you enjoyed my story n_n

And as always, steemit made me do something I haven't done before~

Yeah! me too! @kothy.. haha


May nag chat saken tutulong daw kay Rylai ang mga Bagani ng sansinukob >__< haha sorry last ko na yan... 😂 😂 😂


Galing kothy :) Di ko kaya mag English ng ganyan.. baka di na ako makapag post sa future pag tinry ko yan.. hahahaha 😁 😁 😁

There's no harm in trying kuya! Steemit pushing people to their limits! haha

Pa-humble pa si kuya @ezraabas eh yung blogs niya puro english naman haha

hahaha nkakahiya kc sa english mo eh hinukay pa sa dictionary yung words. haha

Hey, i know her! ;)

I see you're a man of culture as well! ;)

So where's the second part? I want it, and I want it now!! Nice story, although I must admit, "Dota!? Can't she think of anything that could be interesting, this would surely ruin the story". But after reading it, yeah, if the names would've been different I would have been impressed more so than this. But a great piece nonetheless... I wonder how should I face this with my entry... Hmmm, now you've got me thinking @kothy. Great job kid!

Thank you kuya @jamesanity06! I'm so bad at naming characters that I had a character from a game named 'Midnight Amazona' haha

I'm really happy that my story impressed you hehe Hoping to see your piece soon!

Kothy the 'Midnight Amazona' :D haha.
Great story. It's nice to see you trying to do other things. And it seems you're a good writer too.
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Congratulations! This post has been featured to Daily Steemit Family Ph Featured Posts #76 🇵🇭

Thank you Ohanaaa <( ♥ U ♥ )>

You are truly awesome! When you mentioned that this will be a fan-fiction from DOTA I did imagine that you will definitely do well on it. You are truly an awesome folk and not only as an artist but also a writer. Btw since you started this series and you have some folks waiting on the next chapter as I do, keep us updated on it. No pressure maybe tomorrow a new one? Hahha

Thanks for joining too!

Thank you kuya @tpkidkai!! I really want to finish the story as I already have an ending in mind but I'm still inexperienced with illustrating with words. So, it might take a while before I come up with the next chapter (definitely not tomorrow though! haha)

I had lots of fun making this story~ Really thankful for the opportunity to let out the mini stories happening in my head hehe

awesome artwork @kothy :D I really like Rylai too when I played Dota, she was like the princess that I never had :(

Thank you @looserwin! Haha

I wish I have my princess now.. :3 haha

You will, @looserwin, eventually ;)

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