First of all, i completely love your interpretation of 'our version of reality' and that you gave me what not everyones version, but ours, the one growing on steemit, working references to other stories in there as well, just perfect. Normally, that would be offputting, but here, it is a genius way at meeting that! I really love the debt idea, the going out and paying off some unknown debt in a new body, the idea of being owned, and the nameless It. Your entries never fail to entertain and bring a smile, the sense of excitement in your writing is always so contagious, another very strong story!

Results and the next round are out! I can't wait to see what you write for this one <3