2 Sentence Horrifying Blind Dates: Blue The Candles Too Soon (Original Story)

in #story7 years ago (edited)


Meeting in an online chat room linked to a study group they were both in with the same professor, they had become extremely infatuated with one another and set up a one night stand the following evening; he came over the next night bringing an assortment of romantic items, remembering that her birthday was next week; she would be turning 18, the same age as him.


He met her at the front door of the big two-story house with a long kiss and a touchy embrace and they slipped upstairs to her bedroom, eagerly slipping off their clothes and he, playing soft music off of his phone, swiftly lit the candles on the surrounding dressers and lifted the blanket over their connected bodies; lost in the moment, she had failed to mention that they needed to be quick, when ten minutes quickly passed, her bedroom door swung open, blowing the candles out, with the hallway light illuminating her athletically broad, wide-eyed father angrily gripping his black nightstick, fully suited in his dark blue police uniform...















Blind dates can live you blind sighted to all the possibilities of hurt awaiting you. Stay away from the underage women, and avoid police at all costs, especially regarding their beloved daughters!


Make sure to join my 2 Sentence Horrifying Blind Dates Contest # 2 Here


Check my previous posts on my @peacemaker & @verbal-d account for examples of a 2 Horrifying Blind Date

Cold Hearted Collector

Blindfolded Swingers




Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.


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I got a bellyRub and this post has received a 1.42 % upvote from @bellyrub thanks to: @zeartul.

Thank you very much @zeartul, hope you enjoyed this small snippet of fiction. Feel free to enter my contest

You are most welcome.

nice post terrifing gippy voted good job wish you the same:)

Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed this quick short story. :)


This post got a 4.62 % upvote thanks to @verbal-d - Hail Eris !

Wow a police 👮 officer, big trouble for him... very good

That is one of a young man's worst fears! I can't even imagine how terrified and shocked he must have been seeing the father. Thanks for reading my friend.

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