The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 14 (1 of 2) (My Original Novel)

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Chapter 14 (1 of 2)

The lush, secluded glade had provided for a more than adequate shelter against the heavy downpour. The forest itself was teeming with the sounds of all manner of birds and cloaked wildlife. Tiny water droplets slid off textured leaves and twisting branches to echo off the ground in an array of tinkling melodies. A last few shimmering rays of light cast themselves upon the brown scattered foliage. The first signs of impending darkness as the massive oak tree loomed strong and proud, arms reaching out in all directions. The hour was growing late and soon nightfall would be upon them.

Marv rested his thick muscled back into a deep indentation within the wide trunk base. Dee and Sy roamed just a few feet away. The beautiful oak had stood there for hundreds of years in serene tranquillity enjoying the bliss of relative isolation. Being at one with nature as well as its furry and feathered inhabitants. Most importantly, far away from prying eyes and the dramas associated with city life. The odds of three synthetics and a young child choosing to rest beneath its protective cover and discussing their next plan of action in the throes of a global political incident were billions to one. But that is exactly what was happening now.

Sy was fidgety. He decided a good way to release any leftover tensions would be by kicking soggy leaves into the air. They rustled noisily as he did so, much to the annoyance of his partners in crime.

“Do you really have to do that, Sy?” complained Dee glaring at him.

“Yes. Yes, I do. I’m still not sure my feet are fully touching the floor yet.” He looked at Marv relaxing on the ground, one knee pointed toward the sky and the small child lying fast asleep on his shoulder. “Great plan, Marv. “Everyone wrap your arms around my neck and grab onto me.” you said. Just fantastic. And now? I’m cold, it’s uncomfortable and oh sorry, but did I mention we’re also considered cold blooded killers on the run from the police?”

Marv turned to him, his clean white head speckled with rain. “I understand, Sy. I get it. Your whole world has been flipped upside down and you haven’t had the time to get your head around that fact.” The boy stirred upon his shoulder, but drifted back off to slumber in the next instant. “You know that famous saying about spilling your milk and crying? Well, it couldn’t be applied more aptly than right now. You’re in it, so deal with it.” Even lowered, his voice sounded like a rumbling tank in the distance. He watched him expressionless as Marv continued speaking. “I want to help us all. I really do, Sy. But for that to actually happen, I need you to open your mind a lot more and view the bigger picture.”

Dee stood motionless, arms folded, looking deep into the shaded forest. She began attempting to come to terms with the guilt of her tragic accidental mishap along the way but that did not stop it from tearing her up inside. The horrifying image of what she had done to that young attendant replayed over and over in her mind like a broken record stuck in an endless loop. She knew if things were to move forward from here, she had no choice but to deal with it and move on. Marv’s spilt milk analogy being exercised once again.

“What bigger picture? The synthetics versus the humans? Come on, Marv. Don’t take me to be that much of a fool, please. This is not some conspiracy movie being played out for the masses. It’s just two races trying to live in harmony with each other and as peacefully as possible. We’re the new players to this game so of course some time for everyone to adjust was needed. I'm not so sure about that now though.”

He inched closer to Marv, finding a modicum of courage to concede his own line of reasoning. “You really think our merry little band is going to save all synthetics from some imaginary life of servitude? What is this big threat hanging over all our heads that we’ve had to disrupt our entire lives for to fight against? You tell me right now!”

Dee turned around, herself taken aback at Sy’s bravery. Marv lowered his gaze toward the ground. “Let me ask you something first. If you feel so strongly about our deluded visions of lunacy, why did you tag along with us?”

Sy felt a burst of anger and hurt pour throughout his body but concealed it well. “What? Are you serious? Did you forget how I was snatched off the road like some stray cat and whisked away to your basement? Where was the choice in that or am I missing some vital piece of information?” His raised voice did little to perturb Marv who sat and listened whilst still caught in an uneasy stare, but he responded nonetheless.

“You had a choice. We didn’t hold you prisoner or anything. Who forced you to stay with us? You could have easily slipped off into the night and gone to the authorities. Given them our exact location and help having us turned into the law. But you didn’t.”

Marv turned his dead eyes upon him who felt his newfound strength evaporate like steam from a kettle. “And that speaks volumes to me.” he said with an amiable smile, much to the surprise of Sy. “Remember, everyone does has a choice. You either do or you don’t. It’s as simple as that. Like this tree back here.” He patted down the tough bark with a free hand at his side. “From this single thick foundation has spread thousands of branches and twigs. Each one plotting a new unique route to their corresponding tip. A dense series of intricate pathways, which in essence could be compared to the decisions we make throughout the course of our lives.” Sy listened in as he adjusted the child with a gentle nudge.

“So what I’m trying to get at is that neither myself, the world nor even Dee controls your actions. You do. You’re standing here right now because of you and can’t blame anybody else for it. And that is ironically the core reason of why I think it’s time to make our stand for the collective. Complete freedom of choice for every synthetic out there today and in the future.”

He struggled to find an answer to that question. After all, it was true that never at any point was he kept under forced duress or through violent means. The conviction and sheer stubborn-headed drive of Marv’s words could not help but impress Sy to some degree at least. It was plain to see that he spoke straight from the heart. But the act of taking such a huge leap of faith without having the relevant cold hard facts to back it up was another story altogether. A simple hunch just would not do.

“So why do you feel that way then, Marv?” he asked. “What led you down this path in the first place with Dee. You did promise to tell me the truth, right? Well, we got all the time in the world now and I’m all ears.”

“Actually, no, we haven’t.” he replied with a sly grin. “But as I said before, it’s the choices we make that define us and I’m no exception. I used to work as a weapons and supplies loader down at the Rekwell munitions factory. There’s a good reason as to why you’ve never seen a synthetic similar in size and stature to me. Because there are none. I was built for one purpose alone. Heavy duty lifting and warehouse maintenance.” Sy shuffled in toward Marv and crouched down beside him, focused in on every word he uttered. “So you used to work for the military?” he said, nodding his head while trying to process this unexpected revelation.

“Well, more like benefitted them than worked for, Sy. See, the humans still look upon us as a tool. A work machine with a few extra bells and whistles. The days of human’s having to exert to manually operating their machinery have now been completely replaced by the autonomous model. Us. We’ll carry out the jobs that they laboured and toiled over for so many years. I’m telling you, they still see us as purely a convenience factor for themselves. As I said, a useful tool.”

Sy glanced over at Dee who had turned to face them both but now appearing distinctly starry eyed and glazed over. Lost in some deep mode of thought at the information Marv was reciting. However, he was under no false pretences. She had already known all this for a very long time indeed.

“The humans are missing one fundamental concept though.” Marv continued as he looked back to him. “One major piece of the puzzle that they invariably fail to see in all their delusions of superiority. We’re life, we’re alive. The days of the so-called “dumb terminals” are well and truly over. Now we arrive not only to serve as a useful replacement for their machinery, but possibly even the humans themselves… ”


Hope you enjoyed this chapter of my novel, please look out for more on the way... (author: @ezzy)

The Symbiotic Protocol - Prologue
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 1
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 2
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 3
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 4
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 5
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 6
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 7
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 8
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 9
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 10
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 11
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 12
The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 13

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Ahh... I couldn't imagine a better night to welcome Christmas. Cozied up in a warm blanket, holiday tunes blaring softly on the radio, while slouched back in a soft cushion, hot tea in hand, reading one of my favorite series in recent memory. This is the life.

This chapter is easily tied for second-favorite (along with the previous chapter) closely following that amazing chase sequence from a while back. Right from the onset, the scenery was just so splendidly written. The way it served as a backdrop for our synthetic protagonists fit just so perfectly. I'm curious about the 2nd part though, as this already served as a great foil to the previous chapter. You way with words never cease to amaze me, brother!

With every chapter, I can't help but classify the characters in the order of my personal favoritism. I'm glad that this chapter explored the different ways the protagonists deal with what happened. It's so wonderful how they differ from each other, yet they somehow form an awkwardly cohesive unit.

Finally, we get a clearer view of Marv's backstory! It wasn't the conspiracy-laden one that I had theorized, but it's the backstory that he so rightfully deserves. His nuanced reaction really made him stand out, and he has inched himself into my favorite character. I've always thought of Marv as being this level-headed guy that, while he doesn't know the answer to everything, he slows time in his own personal space so that he could think of some awesome reaction. Marv is zen, and zen is Marv.

The philosophical and ethical dilemma was handled quite nicely at the very end. As someone who used to deal with AI on a professional basis, it really puts things in perspective.

This was such a nice treat that I was glad to have opened ahead of Christmas morn. Happy holidays, my friend, and I hope that you receive the same amount joy that you spread with your tales :D

@jedau, my man!

Again, utterly phenomenal comment, my bro!

Yep, this was all about the fallout from the crazy incident back at the gas station but this time from the point of view of the synthetics. I'm so glad you liked how I put this chapter together and feel so happy that I seem to be getting it right. I'm putting a lot of thought into slotting what goes where but without sacrificing too much on pacing and flow so I thank you so much for keeping me on the right track.

Been reading so much about writing novels and apparently the middle is the most difficult part to put together so I'm treading with care, believe me. But yeh, Marv is great and so far an invaluable source of help for Dee. He has lived most of his life being freed from the constraints of the Samson chip so understands how to use his abilities much better than Dee.

Get ready for me to throw a few curveballs in later chapters but I'm hoping they won't disappoint. Marv's backstory is one I mulled over for ages but given what is coming up in future chapters, this seemed the best one to go with. All will make sense soon. :)

Blessing you down to the ground for your amazing comments and will hopefully have the last part of this chapter out soon. See you soon, my friend! :)

I discovered @jedau through your comment section, now not only do I get the awesome privilege of being on your novel's journey with you I also have the interaction between two truly genuine and wonderful individuals to look forward to reading at the end of each chapter! So well done @ezzy, loving it!

Please may I add we also get the incredible honour of having the fantastic @dreemit too! I'm so blessed to have your helpful and "so appreciated you can't imagine" comments too! You both are just simply the greatest! :)

Aw shucks, haha! I'm so glad I discovered you :)

Aww, you guys! I'm really thankful for this budding friendship we're developing here. It's nice to have peers you can bounce feedback and ideas with. I'm just highly appreciative of everything and I'm glad that I've found like-minded people in you two. Makes the journey all the more enjoyable :D

I'm thankful too!! Like-minded people are difficult to find so it's truly a blessing :)

Haha! Curveballs are what I expect, and I shall welcome them all with my mouth agape! I've said it before in my character review that I thought there was more to Marv than it seems, and you replied with your character notes indicating the same thing haha that's why I'm really excited to see where it takes him :D

Thanks, my bro! Things are tricky now so I'm treading very carefully, lol!

@jedauI love your feedback, you are such a genuine guy, I'm glad you discovered @ezzy who deserves the praise and to have such an amazing fan/supporter. I bet your encouragement means the world to him.

More than you can imagine, @dreemit! :)

Thanks for noticing @dreemit :D Being genuine is all I know how to approach this. I'm just glad that my comments are being put to good use. It's such an underrated medium that the Steemit community at large aren't taking full advantage of. I just try to act the way I want to be treated, so I make sure to commend people for their efforts.

BTW, I've left a long comment on your Playground series as well. I'm not sure if you had the chance to read it.

Oh! Thanks for reminding me. I saw that you commented but I wanted to give it real attention and I was busy, I'll go check it out now. I agree that people aren't taking full advantage, I'm glad you are ;)

I sense the beginning of a writers guild!! :)

Now that would be fun! Writer's guild of steemit :)

YES! Nothing like an awesome origin story :D

What a great chapter! I really like how you develop characters and every time we learn a little more about them! Marv is super cool! And to me Marv is right, they are no longer dumb terminals, they feel alive to me too!

On a side note: Personally, I actually like it when the chapters are a little shorter or split in half. It's like a little gem that you can read in between tasks without having to really sit down for it, like when you read a book. I think shorter chapters suit a platform like Steemit better.

Hey buddy! Thanks for the compliment!

Been meaning to put up his back story for a long time now but never quite found the right moment. They are definitely not "dumb" anymore, lol and big things are coming up very soon. Watch this space!

Thanks for your support of me splitting up the chapter. They were just getting too long and I felt needed to be broken down somewhat. So if anything, that means the story will flow better and I'll be posting more regularly.

Bless you for the great comments and I hope to see you again here real soon! :)

I'm gonna have to say the same thing as @myb, great to finally uncover the history behind Marv. That, and the further exploration of the synthetics thoughts about their race.

Loving every post @ezzy! :D

Thanks, man.

The chapters are just getting too damn long so apologies for splitting this one. But yeh, glad things are moving along nicely with the story so far and Marv is finally being fleshed out (no pun intended, lol)...

Bless you for your great comments, bro...

Finally Marv get the backstory he so rightly deserves. He's is my favourite character so far (just a little ahead of Dee, lol).

Top writing skills as always.

Hey @myb.

That's awesome! Thanks for the compliment! Glad to see you're picking favourites now, lol!!! :)

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Thanks very much, @baerdric.

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