Hey lovely @dreemit!

Thanks so much for the humbling feedback. This and the last chapter were quite exposition heavy so I tried very hard to keep the overall flow as tight ans compact as possible. Hopefully I somewhat succeeded in that.

And you describe Dolores to a tee. Nobody is perfect is this world and her love for James is separate from a personality full of holes. However, when the crap hits the fan, she knows how to stand up for them both.

Thanks so much as always for your incredible feedback. I was going to contact you via steem.chat but I think it's down for a bit.