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RE: UNPROVEN Chapter Nine "The Big O"
Yeah, I get what you mean, and yes it is common for romance, I read a lot of that before attempting this book. But...I wonder if it would help to put an extra space when I'm changing who is thinking? Or perhaps even a couple asterisks...though I think that would disrupt the flow too much. I'll try the spaces, see how it looks.
I think the asterisk or some sort of separator would do it good. Gives the reader a sense that the scene is shifting POV. I don't think spaces would matter that much in a physical book. Some might even think the extra spaces might be a type. The separators won't disrupt the flow I think, and, in my opinion, is the best way to go without changing anything from the text.
Okay, I tried it out, let me know what you think.
OH SHOOT!! That looks so awesome! Might do that asterisk separator myself in future POV switching stories! Haha!