Cant wait to see what happens in part 2 :) . The story seems pretty interesting. I actually recently posted 3 chapters from a science fiction story I am writing if you want you can check it out here:
https://steemit.com/sciencefiction/@digitalcosmos555/miscellaneous-writing-4-nyborg-chapter-1
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