Message in a Bottle... by Jeremiah Whitehead
Message in a Bottle
I am standing in a field, staring at an expanse of darkness. The stars have winked out and the world spins towards the future at about a billion miles-per-hour. I know, I'm exaggerating, but not by much, not anymore. I'm about 312 years old now, so I've just entered my Secondary Adolescence with the knowledge that our world is circling just inside the ring of the Event Horizon of Magnuss Veronus, the Black Hole that engulfs the known Universe.
It took us 400,000 years to truly figure it out, but we're also aware now that we never actually die either. Our essence exists just beyond the Barrier. Now, I'm explaining this to a bunch of yokels from nearly a half-a-million years ago, so of course none of you will understand; but just let it simmer in the Collective Human Mind and, sooner-or-later, Humanity will crack the code.
I just hope that you guys can hear me and appreciate what I'm saying. Death does not exist. Death is just another state, and Humans will move beyond Death as well. Of course there will be dangerous times and centuries of war over time spans (I hate what our nature used to be and how we use to behave, but we even get past the anger). I'm sending this message to the past in the hopes that someone will find it and spread the word. It's a message of positivity and righteousness... God IS. He exists. We all meet Him, but I'm only using the understandable gender identification that your Humanity uses. He does and does not. He is and is not. God is the Power; and the Black Hole is the culmination of the Evils of our world throughout time.
Magnuss Veronus came into existence when the hatreds and hostilities formed. It has grown around us and pulls us in ever-so-slowly. We have been circling for the span of Humanity. Now it is done. This is good news. We have found peace and now orbit in the Magnuss Ring, stable between that force of hatred and the peace that we now hold.
I am sending this to you to tell you that there is hope... and to receive a high grade on my project. Thank you for allowing me to reach into your lives.
Thanks for reading my little story.
I believe <3
I love the story!
I may not believe in the same way as many, I do believe.
I grew up a Jehovah's Witness (of sorts from Mom) and agnostic from Dad and came to my own faith by adversity.
I grew up Lutheran and just adapted my own blend of science and faith when I was older. I posted about my belief here on Steemit if you weren’t aware yet (https://steemit.com/belief/@dbzfan4awhile/a-religious-philosophy-we-are-one). It’s from months ago.
Neat story. Reminds me a bit of the "Last Question" by Isaac Asimov.
Any time I am spoken of in the same sentence as a great writer such as Isaac Asimov (unless it's negatively comparing my skills) then I'm pleased to hear it. I could only hope to be as strong a writer as some of those from the past.
Thanks.
Great! Did you receive this, I mean channel this, or is it fictive? Interesting points in your text. Upped and resteemed.
This story is completely fictional.
It could as well be true!
I would find it hard to believe that someone from 400,000 years in the future is going to send me a message about peace.
Time is only a concept, not reality, more illusion. The past doesn't exist, it is over. The future neither exists it is not yet here. The only thing what really exists is the now, every moment, here and now. I know that's somehow controvers, but except it for a moment for illustrating purposes. If there is a planet earth in the here and now, there might be a planet earth in another now, that does exist on another layer of existence, which we call future. Let's say it's not 400,000 years from now, but in another parallel universe, that has already reached a
as you call it.
Then it might as well be possible, that another you, on another layer of existence finds a way to send messages to you, perhaps via wormholes, or via some kind of channeling, which is nothing but the usage of the sub-quantum highways of awakened consciousness, the spiritual, divine connections also called quarks that connects every form of existence on every layer of existence.
... or something like that.
That's really reaching deep to make this possible. So you believe this possible... well, it may be possible; however, in this case I did not receive a message from another time nor another universe. I do think it's an interesting and thought-provoking concept.
Thanks for that great input.
I believe, that a lot of things we've been told is not true, or only a part of the story. I a wider perspective, everything is a possibility. And every thought ist already an energetic manifestation in this world. The physical manifestation of the thought might follow or not, that depends on the intensity we put into it and if we want it to be manifested. There are of course things we don't want to be manifested. But think of the great inventions, almost everyone didn't believe to be possible and the inventors who had faith in what they believed, and in doing that they pushed the frontiers of the universe a little bit further. Take for example the brothers Wright and their first attempts to fly, Nicola Tesla who invented electricity as we know it, Thomas Edison and who invented the light bulb (actually it was Tesla who invented it at the same time). Or Ford, Otto and Daimler for their first motor cars. Cellphones, Computers, etc.
Everything was impossible at a specific point of the now and at our point of the now it is self-evident.
And receiving messages of another "time" or "space" is not a new concept. There are so many channels out there channeling messages of other time-space realities right now.
I hope this encourages you to let some more fictive writing and ideas stream through your pencil into manifestation!
Stay steemed!
Love, Unity & Abundance
Holger
It is true and I just got done saying that ideas come first to someone. I was just commenting this particular instance as fiction but I will continue to write like this st times. Thanks.
I'm learning very good things from you
Well, then keep reading!
thank you for the word though it was somehow indirect i do believe we live to live again.
I didn't think it was all that hidden. I wanted to create a little story that made people think and have hope. Or, perhaps, I'm from far in the future and have been sent to give my own message in a bottle.
This story has dragged me into the dream world. Thank you very much
It is what I set out to do, and to make you think about existence differently.
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Best wishes
Snekky
Thank you dear Snekky, I truly appreciate that you liked this short-short story.
Nice Sci-Fi! I loved the dive into the struggle. The despair and the hope, the messy and the calm... all in a small bottle :)
Precisely: A message in a bottle. Thanks!
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