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RE: #Freewrite: Too Much Beating (short story)
Thanks for your comment.... Many of my stories like that so either I accept them as is or try to make them more story like. I want to write longer version of this with the fight reasons explained & more ending-like ending. But that's for another day.
I struggle to classify this as ‘fiction”. It sounds like the narrative of an event - real or imaginary, more like an entry from your diary, than a story with a plot and an ending (happy ending or otherwise).