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RE: 100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY 36 - Freedom's Respite
Thank you for your insights. I felt much the same way about the billiards imagery. I'm not sure if I want to change it, or clear it up more, or just let it be. You are right, the poem was more personal, but I did want it to read universally as well. 😎