La familia Druit- Obra propia - relato corto/ The Druit Family - Short story

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Una familia típica de las costas del ruit, una notoria pareja, cada uno con características que los hacían brillar y los convertían en únicos, el marido un hombre de linaje trabajador y de valores aunque no muy culto, y la dama descendiente de una familia española que se quedo a residir en aquella costa y tenía una personalidad tan amable y lindap que solo se podía comparar a la más bella y Clemente de las reinas, tres dulces hijas, que con su Inmaculada sonrisa y la inocencia que irradiaba de sus ojos conquistaron a todo el pueblo.
Ellos vivían en una casa que resaltaba bastante entre sus vecinos, materiales de construcción de buenísima calidad, una infraestructura que hablando artísticamente era una obra maestra, a pesar de que no era tan grande, se podía decir que lo mejor viene en tamaños pequeños, su constructor había tenido claras referencia de antiguas edificaciones victorianas, además la casa estaba rodeada de montes, y viejos pozos abandonados, la flora era el principal atractivo del pueblo, la naturaleza todavía mantenía su jerarquía, eso era lo único que mantenía a aquella familia ahí, aunque no por mucho.

Al ser una población bastante rural y alejada de la civilización moderna, se gastaba demasiado tiempo en viajar hacia la capital más cercana, la vida cotidiana en el pueblo.

La vida cotidiana en ruit eran definidos principalmente por paseos cercanos a los pequeños lagos que estaba relativamente cerca al pueblo, almuerzo junto a los vecinos, y relaciones bastantes sociables con todos, eran un lugar tan pequeño que toda la gente se conocía, todos se saludaban, todos se sonreían.

Aquella nostalgica rutina hubiera seguido pero la noche del primero de abril, en pleno invierno, las hojas de los árboles eran golpeadas con fuerza por el viento, en un perfecto caos el cielo estaba siendo azotado violentamente por truenos y relámpagos era como una sinfonía en la cual se marcaba un ritmo tétrico.
El va y ven de la gente gritando sorprendidas por la repentina lluvia torrencial que caía sobre sus cabezas, los había alcanzado de improvisto en las calles, entretenía a las despistadas niñas de la familia druit, que se asomaban con vigor en su balcón lleno de flores marchitas por el tiempo y el descuido.
El barón de la casa(marido), esposo de la autonombrada señora de las rosas por su intenso fanatismo por aquellas flores, ordenó a sus 3 hijas retirarse lo más pronto posible del balcón y entrar a sentarse alado de la cálida leña que habían prendido en la chimenea.
Sin tardar mucho, las niñas obedecieron, caía la media noche y la familia aún seguía recostada junto al fuego en la sala principal, ruidos extraños invadían el ambiente, el tic-tac del reloj era un poco desesperante para la señora y los rayos de la tempestad amargaban el pasar del tiempo.
A partir de que el reloj de pared, con sus manecillas hizo notar las 2 de la madrugada, la hija más pequeña llamada Laura se levantó apartándose de sus hermanas que estaban dormidas, y en la tenebrosa oscuridad se de decidió que debía ir al baño, la casa no era tan grande como una mansión de la época victoriana de las cuales estaba inspirada, quedaba pequeña alado de una pero aún así en ese pueblo era lo más cercano a un palacio lujoso, subió las escaleras que estaban en aquella sala, y conectaba directamente con la zona de las habitaciones de las niñas.
Laura camino despreocupada por el pasillo, la indiferencia de una pequeña niña impedía que el ambiente tumbase su temple, mientras se acercaba al baño al final del pasillo, un poderoso trueno rugió como un león y hizo saltar a Laura la cual se sorprendemio bastante.
Antes de abrir la puerta del baño, desde una brecha formada en la entrada de una de las habitaciones que se encontraban a los laterales de este, una pequeña mano con piel pálida se iba asomando, un rostro infante, con mirada muerta y una sonrisa desesperanzadora hizo un gesto juntado sus labios con su dedo indice, dando lugar al clásico silencio.
Laura ante tal.....

English

A typical family of the coasts of fruit, a notorious couple, each with features that made them shine and turned them into unique, the husband a male worker lineage and values but not very educated, and a family descendant Lady Spanish that I was left to reside on the coast and had a kind personality and lindap only could compare to the most beautiful and Clement of Queens, three sweet daughters, who conquered all the people with his Immaculate smile and innocence radiating from her eyes. They lived in a House that highlighted fairly among its neighbors, very good quality building materials, an infrastructure that, artistically speaking, was a masterpiece, while it was not as big, one could say that the best comes in small sizes its builder had clear reference of old Victorian buildings, besides the House was surrounded by mountains and old abandoned wells, flora was the main attraction of the village, nature still maintained its hierarchy, that was the only thing that I kept that family there, although not by much. Being a quite rural and remote from modern civilization people, spent too much time traveling to the nearest capital, daily life in the village. Everyday life in ruit were defined mainly by walks near the small lakes which was relatively close to the town, lunch with neighbors, and relations enough sociable with everyone, were such a small place that everyone knew it, everyone is greeted, everyone is smiling. That routine nostalgica had followed but the night of the first of April, in midwinter, the leaves of the trees were hit hard by wind, into perfect chaos heaven was being whipped violently by thunder and lightning was like a Symphony in which is marked a dismal pace. He goes and see people shouting surprised by the sudden torrential rain which fell on their heads, had reached them improvist in the streets and entertained clueless girls druit family, which had vigorously in its flower-filled balcony withered by time and neglect. The baron's House (husband), spouse of the self-appointed Lady of Roses by his intense fanaticism for those flowers, ordered their 3 daughters withdraw as soon as possible of the balcony and enter winged sitting on the warm wood that had been lit in the fireplace. Without much delay, girls obeyed, fell midnight family was still lying next to the fire in the main hall, environment was invaded by strange noises, the ticking of the clock was a little desperate for Lady and rays of the tempest amargaban passing of the time. From that wall clock, with its hands noted the 2 am, the smaller daughter named Laura rose away their sisters who were asleep, and in the murky darkness were's decided that it had to go to the bathroom the House wasn't as big as a mansion of the Victorian era which was inspired, was a small winged but still in that village was the closest thing to a luxurious Palace, climbed the stairs that were in that room, and connected directly with the zon to the girls room. Laura walk carefree down the aisle, the indifference of a little girl prevented the environment to tumbase their mettle, as it came to the bathroom at the end of the hallway, a powerful Thunder roared like a lion and blew Laura which is sorprendemio enough. Before opening the bathroom door, from a gap formed at the entrance of one of the rooms that were on the side, a small hand with pale skin was sticking out, an infant, with dead eyes and a hopeless smile face gestured j greased her lips with his finger index, giving rise to the classic silent. Laura before such...

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:O WOOOW Gran post, te sigo para estar atento a tus publicaciones me ha encantado un monton.

muy bueno, me gusto la obra. saluditos

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