So I don't really have any specific critique from a technical standpoint, but I do feel that some choices in samples and style could be changed.

The drums used themselves seem a tad industrial and I think using a more out there sample with some of them could be advantageous. The build up snare at around 1:05 could use a bit more punch to it and the kick that comes afterwards has too much reverb in my opinion. It's a spacey emotional piano that has this HUGE dance kick behind it and I think the contrast between the two could be toned down.

I'm also not really a fan of the moog bass that comes in around 0:30, but that's probably because I was expecting something less dancy in general given the intro. And I really like the intro! The pitched piano sounds super cool and the transition to pluck was well done.

All in all nice track, I just think it need's to dedicate itself more to a feeling or at least have the synths increase in power with the kick.

Hope this helped you somehow!