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RE: SML Feedback Contest Round Two Starts Now.
Entering again with this one:
https://steemit.com/dsound/@joymatters/questioning-piano
Entering again with this one:
https://steemit.com/dsound/@joymatters/questioning-piano
So I don't really have any specific critique from a technical standpoint, but I do feel that some choices in samples and style could be changed.
The drums used themselves seem a tad industrial and I think using a more out there sample with some of them could be advantageous. The build up snare at around 1:05 could use a bit more punch to it and the kick that comes afterwards has too much reverb in my opinion. It's a spacey emotional piano that has this HUGE dance kick behind it and I think the contrast between the two could be toned down.
I'm also not really a fan of the moog bass that comes in around 0:30, but that's probably because I was expecting something less dancy in general given the intro. And I really like the intro! The pitched piano sounds super cool and the transition to pluck was well done.
All in all nice track, I just think it need's to dedicate itself more to a feeling or at least have the synths increase in power with the kick.
Hope this helped you somehow!
Absolutely agree! Thank you for taking the time to listen and review!
Fuck me with this tune! You are speaking my hears heart with this one! i love the production. the dirt in the sounds are wonderful. Lots and lots of real emotion! it feels like a great place. it reminds me of a Future Islands tune. there is much goodness! the Guru ending is wonderful. simple and strong. romantic. i almost want to write lyrics for it. i might. if i ind the time i will and send it to you. great tune. love it!