My man! Thank you for the kind words and especially giving my piece a chance. I really appreciate it man. I'm also so glad you caught on to what I was trying to do. I really do try to write with a duality. Depending on the person, really depends on what they get out of it. It is intentional and almost a byproduct at this point. I love writing poetry because of the freedom it allows for expression and communication. I can get away with things I could never get away with. I did spend some time on this... relative to how much time I spend on my poetry. I did write a complete poem I saved somewhere because it wasn't close enough to the topic. I wrote a new one and then went back and completely re-wrote the last two sections. So I spent more time on this than most. Thanks for the reply and again, thanks for reading.